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Spoken Word vs B-MAC
Battle Rules:
16-20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes Topic: Silence Good Luck Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-20-05 at 11:43 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
B-MAC has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 10:11 PM.
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A Job that can only be fullfilled, By a quick and Silent Figure.
Entrenched in the long grass, that grows from the Field Gilli suit for camouflage, to prevent from being Revealed Concealed, as a sniper I’ve been sent to full fill a job Trained to be quick, slick and mysterious as If i was god As still as a Brick, This silenced M-21 is a snipers magic stick As if I wasn’t there, as if a bullet came from No where Stuck the enemy straight through his Scared Stare Hitting the ground with a profound Sound I crep up to a nearby mound, Take aim at the nearby prey They will come to his rescue sooner or later today I’m like a tree falling in the woods, When no one is around With out a sound to be heard, no one says a word. As I lay atop this mound, Motionless I glare into my scope As a enemy your hopeless, when I grab a hold of this trigger This cross hair, cares little for these rebel ditch diggers The statistics and figures weigh 10 to 1 But like a needle in this corn field, I cant be out done Like a snake yah cant hear me, But yet I’m so near Silent as a ghost, as quick as a light year |
Spoken Word has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 11:36 AM.
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Aiight here it is ... Good Luck
Silence has me in its death grip, trapped in it's basement Wordless sounds are followed by toungeless statements My lungs cant grasp the air they need to realese my thoughts My throat follows in progression, each letter is fought I hear everything so clear, But yet its still silents words My adjectives have lost power, no more violent verbs I see faces of others, it seems my other senses are intact But the silence drowns the happiness, its too loud to react The evil that i used to hear, suddenly simply dissapeared I use my eyes to pronounciate words, so i only sit and stare My hearing is lost or maybe its the silence that i feel Because the streetlights are bright, but the words are not real My voice was thrown away so my other senses would prosper And i love sight and smell, But i need hearing on that roster I strain to put together words, But no matter how hard i try it My ear lobes take a vacation, and im stuck right back in silence |
Good Job Hommie.. LEts get some votes................
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uppin this for some votes people, ill rtf.......
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Voted For: Spoken Word
ayo i mean damn homie you was ill the vocab,stucture and shit homie you got this homie i uppin this cuz ur ill homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!B-MAC u was good but the tapic silence came more to spoken homie but u was ill too but spoken got more feeling!!!!!!!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Cool..............................uppin........... ..........................
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upping for more votes drop a link ill rtf.........
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Voted For: B-MAC
you took this battle by inches best punch; As if I wasn’t there, as if a bullet came from No where Stuck the enemy straight through his Scared Stare nice weak punch: As a enemy your hopeless, when I grab a hold of this trigger This cross hair, cares little for these rebel ditch diggers ...needs elevation/.../... werd...tight battle vote:B-MAC Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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uppin this for more votes, that vote will get removed also...
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