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Stanza vs. Fuxjustaword
8 Lines Minimum
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24?? check
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24 lines?!?!?!? WTF?
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stanz'a bitch, o' stanz'a bitch
where for art thou, stanz'a bitch? New York, Detroit, or Canada sumthin sumthin, sumthinada ^^^ and no thats not my verse |
stanza'bitch o stanza'bitch
are you from los angeles new york or just a janitor from canada oh stanza'bitch |
Oh damn I almost forgot I was In This league lol
damn Im glad I decided to come in Here checkin In il ldrop tonight ........................Im doin .................8 lines |
Yo This Dude hangin With The Ducks? Yeah now he Think He Mighty He Really Mad Because Im Puttin A Hurtin On His ass Like an Ivy He Dickriderz Already Posting.... Now Yall Tellin Me Do Continue BeCause I Already Know What You Contain... Like a Food Menu You Known Cum Weak Like A Dick With No Muscles You Hopeless Planting Weed In Yo Bird Nest, The Only Time You Show Dopesness You Talkin Softly Because We all know You From That Shy Town When Im finish With You wont be able to Take The Ground Down -Quikie- |
8 llines?!?!?! ..... pussy, lol
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8 Lines is all it takes
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wow... ok Stanz... im not really in the mood to write but i bet w/e im about to drop will beat that
Stanza's probably a chubby little white boy, who secretly likes my lines With my verse ur so in-fat-you-ate-it, i'm not surprised if u bite my rhymes U here 'Holy Shit' wen u look at urself, ive got the broken mirrors provided Cuz wen u Mose'd around Sea's lookin at ur Reflection, the Water divided "O God" the burstin pain, lookin at Ur Avvy, I dont wanna hurt ya mayne Cuz you formerly were a Prince... till i put an end to your Purple Reign And im pure insane, but Ill end weak just to tell you the right facts How do u cum hard in battles with -Quikies-.. .......wen they never render a climax?? (and no im not feedin off of his verse with -Quikie- becuz in almost every battle ive seen of his he has sed that at the end......) this dude was drivin me bananas..... how do u expect sumone to stand up for u dude........if we cant even Stanz'a ? |
*u hear* Holy shit btw
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"O God" the burstin pain, lookin at Ur Avvy, I dont wanna hurt ya mayne
Cuz you formerly were a Prince... till i put an end to your Purple Reign And im pure insane, but Ill end weak just to tell you the right facts How do u cum hard in battles with -Quikies-.. .......wen they never render a climax?? vs. NOTHING. fux didnt even try, the ok lines were barely that, but stanza really had nothing, his lines were mostly played and the concepts were just weak, not to mention that he didnt deliver them hard at all. V/ - Fux. |
Stanza- Alright Your punches was.......No where...Because they were weak, the wordplay was weak also. The only personal was him having "D/R'Z" Which is played out. Good structure though and good rhyming, i suggest to you Put some Multi'z in it.
Fux- Alright Nice verse. The 1st bar was a personal that he bitted, (But he did got unbanned) but either way nice bar. I liked the 3rd bar, had a personal and you flipped it with a punch...Decent Closer Fux. V / Fux for harder Punches. |
uppin....... and btw..... In his sig ull see that he has an OM of his in his sig called "Water Reflection"
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V/Fux
im not waistin time explaining...none of ya seemed ya took time 2 even try 2 come hard besides everyone else said everything i was gone say neway |
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