Premanition vs wayne
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-23-05 at 09:22 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Wayne has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 09:38 AM.

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 09:43 AM.

Let The Games Begin...
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“..Dope? Shit! you can quote that I ‘beg’ to differ..”
Down on two like ya mother, but her legs were stiffer
Kid get a grip you couldn’t be sick if ya brains hurled
Eatin from a bin, that’s like an insight to ‘waynes world’
kid don’t stress, I blame ya girl for them stretched rhymes
cos them overweight stretch lines are bound to effect minds
damn just drop the act bitch and pick up your reality
you bout as much a ‘hot sauce’ as Williams was a casualty (*)
this verse will serve you with flows that ‘paste’ to impress
& you beta hope its ‘spreadable’ so you can taste the success
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(*) – hot sauce is his alias
- Danny Williams ducked his boxing fight this wkend cos he suddenly got
stomach ache
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pu pow

We agreed that I could go over the limit


I Bomb-Geeks with Strong-Speaks that'z bound to Hit prem Harder than Concrete, son your beyond-weak...//
My "Led-Is-Wreckless" each Verse Dispersed Keepin son Dead-and-Breathless..Precision Incisions from "Head-to-Necklace" leave u "Ejectin-Breakfast"...//
ok..check this...

attack-with-a-force-above-average.. so when I pile-drive you from a mile-high you'll land-in-the-core-of-the-planet...//
I'm labeled-as-flagrant.. watch me discard-your-jaw-bitch with a martial-arts-kick when your face lays-on-the-pavement...//
All of your lettering's-wasted on this veteran's-flagrance.. I'll superglue your lips and paste them to leprosy-patients...//(eww)
Mc nice when he writes? Nah...bout to get Slayed twice, I'm cold enuff 2 FREEZE HIS DOME -N- punch'm in the head just to "BREAK THE ICE"...//
Take his life and get RID-OF-THE-CORPSE, smack this PITIFUL-WHORE wit CRITICAL-FORCE, my 'delivery got this "Newbie Kid" hooked' like AMBILLICAL-CORDS...//

~FINISHER~
hit you in "spanish",send "rockets" in your "culo",make him switch his name from scam and take a trip to "pluto"...//

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Voted For: Wayne

wayne gets my vote.
good structure.
nice punches.
ill pile drive you from a mile high .
nice imagination .
good job

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This was feedback posted for Wayne
 

nice battle yall really dope......................

hmmmm don't think that will count with no real explaination


uppin this


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Voted For: Premanition

won easily

Better punches and shit

Other guy had nothing.Got that newb structure too.

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Voted For: Premanition

Premanition

Dope? Shit! you can quote that I ‘beg’ to differ..”
Down on two like ya mother, but her legs were stiffer
3.. Kind of played..
Kid get a grip you couldn’t be sick if ya brains hurled
Eatin from a bin, that’s like an insight to ‘waynes world’
4.. Seen the wayne's world shit before on him.. Decent flip..
kid don’t stress, I blame ya girl for them stretched rhymes
cos them overweight stretch lines are bound to effect minds
0.. Just a weak ass statement.
damn just drop the act bitch and pick up your reality
you bout as much a ‘hot sauce’ as Williams was a casualty
6.. Decent concept..
this verse will serve you with flows that ‘paste’ to impress
& you beta hope its ‘spreadable’ so you can taste the success
3.. Didn't really connect

Total - 16/100

Wayne

Your structure is fucking gay.

Now,

I Bomb-Geeks with Strong-Speaks that'z bound to Hit prem Harder than Concrete, son your beyond-weak...//
0.. No punch..
My "Led-Is-Wreckless" each Verse Dispersed Keepin son Dead-and-Breathless..Precision Incisions from "Head-to-Necklace" leave u "Ejectin-Breakfast"...//
0.. Ejecting breakfast? Forced to shit..
attack-with-a-force-above-average.. so when I pile-drive you from a mile-high you'll land-in-the-core-of-the-planet...//
0.. Just a wack fucking statement..
I'm labeled-as-flagrant.. watch me discard-your-jaw-bitch with a martial-arts-kick when your face lays-on-the-pavement...//
0.. Ok? Can you talk about something relative to a battle?
All of your lettering's-wasted on this veteran's-flagrance.. I'll superglue your lips and paste them to leprosy-patients...//
0.. Just another weak ass statement..
Mc nice when he writes? Nah...bout to get Slayed twice, I'm cold enuff 2 FREEZE HIS DOME -N- punch'm in the head just to "BREAK THE ICE"...//
0.. I DONT GIVE A FUCK ABOUT THIS SHIT. Make a witty fucking punch already..
Take his life and get RID-OF-THE-CORPSE, smack this PITIFUL-WHORE wit CRITICAL-FORCE, my 'delivery got this "Newbie Kid" hooked' like AMBILLICAL-CORDS...//
3.. Decent..
hit you in "spanish",send "rockets" in your "culo",make him switch his name from scam and take a trip to "pluto"...//
0.. Weak ass statement.. weak ass execution.. weak ass shit..

Total - 3/80

Vote - Premanition

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