Pass Drawbacks
 

Pass Drawbacks

People feast and wine then talk but cease to find fault with me
Get off my back you false and whack your criticism not nifty
Swiftly fades, hard to complete tasks involving street trash
Feet get smashed on sidewalks pride stalks like a heat rash
Awaken with thrills taking some pills as forsaken garbage spills
Cats turn their back not concern with facts and that kills
Got my pledge wrecked from neglect but like Susan Sherandum
On TV had to abandon my VIP started to back down throw temper tantrums
At whack clowns, thought separated time for action
My mind in fractions, had to rebound to discover self satisfaction
They try gain advantage but lyrical flames manage to help me
Then a dame sandwich my stealth love then she bandaged my left knee
Cutie renowned with the booty round my duty is going down
On her

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