!Impact! vs ~k-trini~
 

Battle Rules:

12 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-23-05 at 05:02 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

!Impact! has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 05:04 PM.

ok

If i keep rollin and i ceep merkin/
it'll be your jaw guy im hurtin/

Draw for the shank nd start insertin/
and i'll leave real blood still squirtin/

In the night... you'll catch me lerkin/
I'll stab you in the back while your workin/

Strangle you with some wire or string/
Body built upper-cut then i swing/

Ill brake your heart just like a disket/
and i wont find trini just like a comet/

Come heavely just like the blitz/
and ill take you to parts and ill take you to bitz/

~K-Trini~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 05:43 PM.

This cat's about as far from dopeness as Pluto is to the sun
He shows off as much skill as he does his record
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Impact and K-Trini in the title is like seeing a cat-in-rain
Your idea of having impact is having two of these(!) at-your-name
Lines stretched all over the place,he like a squid-out-of -view
I'ma KO you,but you used to it,cause Wes City already did-it-to-you
Between him and me,lyrically,phyysically,it's done,he got no combat
Him storing his AOL CD in a box is how he's ever "Im-Pack"
Gangsta?,me-yeah,you-no9,cause you the one rumbling-with-cops
And just like the evening rain,this cat crumbles-in-drops
Standing front me right 'hair',I outta cut him like a 'barber'
This bitch doesn't drop bombs,like the opposite a pearl harbor

Meh....not my best....but I still merk this newb.

Lmao....................5-0 me.............keep practicing ImPact.

Try making ya rhymes longer,add some worplay and shit.

Voted For: ~K-Trini~

Meh............................................... ........................

This was feedback posted for !Impact!
 

You easily took this by far kid, but I can't vote.

^^wtf???
You tellin Impact he took this by far???

AN why can't ya vote?

You'd get it DQ'd if I voted against you. You'd call it hate.

^^NO I won't.......as long as ya explain it...I won;t get it removed,

And you must be an asshole to think this kid got me easily.He didn't have one punch.

Lol you didn't have any punches either. All your concepts sucked ass, too. Don't cry because you lost.

Trini why are u up ur own ass?
Dont be so confident. I might be new but i dont think ur verses were very good or rhymed for that matter.
Why is somebody an asshole for thinking mine was better than urs? Everybody has a different taste

At least I had concepts and I had multis & personals

The kid had no wordplay,newb structure,basic rhyme sheme,and no punches.

His whole verse was comprised of gangsta talk.Talkin about how he gonna beat me up or kill me while we on the net.Kiddo...that shit dun impress nobody here.Go in real life with that gangsta talk.
And fuck off 9th. degree,,,,you an asshole to think I lost.

i came below my minimum....but I still merked this newb.