MC:Philosopher vs Chalk Clorox
 

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Chalk Clorox has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 06:55 PM.

MC:Philosopher has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 07:28 PM.

yo ima leave a chalk outline of your body like a stencil
and kill you with no point like a broken pencil
you sentenced to lifetime loser time for u to appeal
but ima leave a bigger stain on your record than your own name will
going up side brick walls is the only way ull be a head bangger
im no stranger.....you look at your record and see your own danger
you couldnt sipt freshness if your tooth-paste i a new thread
this cats been runnin like a jack ass and still cant get ahead
you couldnt cds(see these) flows if they were burned on a memorex
they only way hes a head of me in rhyming iz cuz he said he suck in text**

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okay okay voting shall atart and they cant read the second one untill they vote dawg

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

ill kick this off by psycin uou out,
you couldnt beat me if you had a psycik tellin you what im about,
{made no sence 2/10}

your whack you really are,
you need a ghost rider(writer),
cause you cant handle bars,
{4/10saw what you were diong but didnt do it}
for a philosopher you have no tech(technology),
and you suck at text,ill sever your flesh,like virgins after sex,
im here to say,
{no punch here 0/10}
that chrime pays,
ill wave bi (bye)
cause im rippin you apart both ways
{didnt hit 3/10}


yo ima leave a chalk outline of your body like a stencil
and kill you with no point like a broken pencil
{played but good opener..better than his 5/10}
you sentenced to lifetime loser time for u to appeal
but ima leave a bigger stain on your record than your own name will
{nice personal 7-10}
going up side brick walls is the only way ull be a head bangger
im no stranger.....you look at your record and see your own danger{didnt hit hard but cool 5/10}
you couldnt sipt freshness if your tooth-paste i a new thread
this cats been runnin like a jack ass and still cant get ahead
{should have switched but 5/10}
you couldnt cds(see these) flows if they were burned on a memorex
they only way hes a head of me in rhyming iz cuz he said he suck in text**
{played but killin his shit 6/10 should have switched this two}
you killed this cat man keep diong your thing...vote on my battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201011

This was feedback posted for Chalk Clorox
 

fucking weak battle.................................

This was feedback posted for Chalk Clorox
 

Chalk Clorox . . . i think MC:Philosopher has this one . . . but i do like ur closer "ill wave bi (bye)
cause im rippin you apart both ways" but that was really the only good part of ur flow . . . structure needs work and MC:Philosppher i got the closer and all but i think u could have reworded better . . . NO HATE

uppin for votes drop a link and we will hit u back