!Impact! vs young blaze
 

Battle Rules:

12 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-23-05 at 07:53 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

!Impact! has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 07:54 PM.

Young blaze.. dont say sticks or stones they might brake your bones// but the 9 millimetre it will bore your dome// im talking about the toke taging the boddy bagging man yong blaze is dying his mamas crying// Hese a ne b to me thats what im emplying// this beaf starts with the chuv.. and ends with the chuvle... so hoo u rather be the murdered?? or the murderer??
this boy got me stressed i got ma tec in ma vest// and i say who yall bless :)me:)// let no man curs but one of us will leave hear tonight in a hurst!!!ha!! You voters all say im wicked but thats just how i ckick it::so young blaze:: turn over your pre writen lyrics page::

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 08:22 PM.

WHot the fuck i wrote 12 lines there there but spred out

CheCk It...
Son Da Nine'll Clap Ya Cut Ya Spine Geek Cuz My Gunz Iz A Factor
So Watch Me Put Da 'Heat To Yah Back' Like "Chinese Chiropractor
Snatch This Wack Bastards Powers, Practice Ya Rap After Hours
Cuz ImPact Gettin "Stepped On" Like Bathroom Mats After Showers
Ur Nuthin U Couldn't Even Sell Drugs...Ur Rhymes Also Fell
Shots Ring Like Bells.....I'm X"ing Out An IM....Like I was On AoL
Roast Him Through The Computer Screen chew THrought Ya Spleen
Cuz Ya Entire Verse, contained Less Flow,than a Polluted Stream
Split Ya Insides,Leavin This Bitch In The Sky,R U Wishin To Die
Spit sicker than Belly Aches like the Kelly Tape,Y'n Pissin On Eye(i)
Like Ol' GangSta Shows...Ima Run Up On u Wit A Suite An The Ozzie
This Rod-Man,Couldn't Make 2xImpact If he stared In Van Dam Movies

Yah Should GeT this If u Dont......DOnt Vote.....

Voted For: Young Blaze

YB gets this easy........

For starters his structure was a lot better so was readable and he had nice wordplay and punches.

Impact, you need to step up your game before steppin up to vets like yb,

no hate but yb got it easy.

peace

Voted For: Young Blaze

impact- no flow, bad rhymes, bad structure, bad spelling (makes shit hard to follow, work on it)
bad topic, too- this is a RAP battle, u dont need to rhyme about killing people, same goes for u blaze
blaze had better flow, better wordplay
impact really didnt make any attempt to do anything other than say that he would kill blaze
it also hurt him to have a verse that was hard to follow
blaze's verse was nothing special, but his was RAP, not threats

vote- young blaze


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Voted For: Young Blaze

lol i think its a bit obvious who won this.....

blaze you had some nice lines in there, flow was decent n u had some nice multies in there, some of your punches were witty i liked your verse totally killed impacs verse.

impact, man your structure is messed up. try to do your lines like blaze so people know ehere your lines end and begin, punches wernt good really they were played at the most part.

imma give this to blaze he took it easily wit punches flow and structure pz

v/ blaze

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Voted For: Young Blaze

ok this was very ez cuz impact didnt have it in structure really and it was very hard to see ur verse man need to have line and then skip to the next line aight man....ok punches really blaze did good had his punches there jus work on delivery.....and vocab was aight....nice opener as well but try to come hard as u did for ur closer from the opener aight wasnt that hard....and some good line su did good so keep it up blaze....Impact ur verse was very sloppy couldnt really undastand ur verse that well cuz it was all ova the place fix that up aight but i saw some of ur lines and they good but it woulda been a better battle if u had it in structure aight....so...clearly blaze took this battle....cuz i saw hois punches connectin and hittin somewhat hard..and more structure and flow in his verse....so v/youngblaze

Voted For: Young Blaze

ayo man this was ill matic power homie one sided battle man young crazy with the wordplay

practice raps after hours
stepped on like bathrrom mats after showers.
homie thats ill homie you got the vocab,structure,wordplay and personal homie you str8 up man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!