MaRVJay1009 vs Pen N' Paper
 

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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 200

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Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 12:33 AM.

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 12:48 AM.

MaRVJay at first I was thinking u were good but that’s what I thought
Cuz ur verses are like Jaws Sequels u were biting but just not caught
Man RV is not for u, do I gotta tell u 1009 times to get it through ur skull?
I darken the name while for u to get attention ur whole verse should be bold
Cuz they mad borin and u still askin why they callin u amerikas nightmare?
MJ ur verses are like Micheal Jackson no need to ask if they just might scare
Man just face it ur verses will never be hott unless u burn them wit matches
Ur punchlines are weak they like bad baseball players no one actually catches
So now that we kno the truth bout u ur reputation gon fall like rain precipitation
U aint winnin no more u aint lucky like winnin a raffle so thnx for ur participation

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Quick Explanations--(if u dont get any)
1st bar- Cuz he biting like jaws but never been caught cuz jaws always comes back in sequels......
2nd bar- If u notice that the words bolded is in his name and his rhymes are so boin that he whole verse needs to be bolded
3rd bar- His sig says amerikaz nightmare cuz his verses are so scary cuz they so wack....lol and MarvJay the initials is MJ, micheal jackson and his verses are scary like micheal and no need to ask if they might scare
4th bar- The only way that they hott if he burned them....lol....and like bad baseball players they cant play good so they miss the ball when they try to catch it
5th bar- he gon lose his reputation cuz he biting and its gon fall like rain and precipitation is rain.....and when u try to win a raffle u need to have luck but when u lose they always say like thnx for playing or thnx for ur participation...

dis kid is a clown he think net rap is cool,should i slap dis fool?.
'pen n paper' wouldn't sale if he drop'd durin time 2 go 'back 2 school'
fam u gota lil rep on dis site but dont be proud of it fag.
u record tracks? nah u like "dexter's sister" u not "allowed in da lab".
i been back 4 nights...now u talkin like you nice.....where????
ya rap career like 'toy story' u wont have a 'buzz' 4 a few 'light years'.
need protection in his own hood so he give detective's bread.
i aint badd with 'writin tools' but ima fill dis nigga 'pen with lead'.
no hot bars from dis guy just weak...so fam all da lyin pleez stop!
cuzz you couldn't "make-classics"...."designin reeboks".

another amerikaz nightmare bar lmao......

hey idk u and dont have any good personlas from u so what can i do.......lol.....if u had a pic i woulda diss u but u dont so ur sig is next.....lol........uppin dis for some votes....hott battle.....

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Marv murdered him...

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uppin for more votes cmon yallll..................

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