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The Waters Reflections
The Waters Reflections In These Waters I Think I See Another Dead Nigga Lookin At me Maybe In These Waters I See A Life That Useless From Weed In These Waters Lies A Poor Reflection Of a Man Thats Tired of 5-0 Detections In These Waters Lies Just Another Face Of a Man Thats Lost In Life and in Place In The Waters Reflection My Troubles Rest or shall I say my Worries At There Best Worries of Dying from a Bullet To The Chest Livin Life In The Present Full Of Regrets In These Waters I Know That I Saw a Young Man Thats Runnin From The Law In These Waters Lie The pain And tears But In The Waters I Wish to See....A Young Man who Lives Who he Is Any Feed Dropped will Be Returned In Any Way Possible :thumbup: |
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Damn Stanza didn't know you could get that deep it was hot liked the structure vocab was tight this was hot 8.5/10
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LOl Yeah man I Like doin This
thanx Still uppin for feed |
Thanx Man .....................Still Uppin
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i felt this was a deep drop lots n lots of imagery
gooshit!! |
this was good, really felt it, but it sounded more like a poem to me, but thats just me, overall good read, keep it up
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Thank you All for the feed Lets keep it goin ..........
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Damn, thats mo like a poem lol, nice work... liked the emotions
a classic one... lol "A Life That Useless From Weed" haha... nice |
It was decent...
Vocab lacked, emotion was there, but you could've put a little more into it. It just wasn't as deep as I was expecting it to be. Imagery, however, was pretty good, so props on that. Overall, a solid piece RTF and hit up the link in my sig |
yeah, nice concept, emotion was there, the imagery was hot. nice drop!
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