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Da Mahnster vs Wes City
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4 Barz No Recycling No Biting Due in 30 minz. Blind Spitz Duece Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-21-05 at 08:18 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Da Mahnster has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 07:49 PM.
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Wes City has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 07:57 PM.
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Ya lines are pre-school kid, im the one to haunt ya
Cause after 3rd grade no ones been afraid of monstahs Give it up your not gangsta bitch, so jus stop-be I know for a fact Mis-spelling is not a thug hobbie Im known to murder kids, while you just known as a bore Ill Drown you in a lake and leave ya ass dead for shore |
I'd have to perform a sayonce to "See-ya-Post" might as well dissapear cuz u "DROPP'N GHOST"//
cant 'beat-me' to get this "SEA-MEN-CLOSE" u aint a rapper, just "Dreaming-Shows"// you best 'choke' like you "Toung-Tied" Ya rhymes arent hot if shit "Sun-Fried"// Why you STUNT GUY?? now u best RETIRE and finish liek "DA-Alumni"//(Only skilless) your "Barz-show" you spinning out more than "Car-showz" CITY?? u aint "LARGE BRO"// You finished...i aint coming "HARD-THO"...for you today would be a "SMART CHOKE"// Cant Graduate-Here , I Saturate-ears, Wes 'cant pass flow', he don't PUMP-NO-FEAR// 214 postz 0 Winz!! ...u better "UP FOR YEARZ",dont " Pump no Tearz" not 1 bar from u gon "PUMP NO CHEERS"// |
ya rhymes are horrible im one to throw fists
his lines arent wack....there garabge or shit shit my last bar got cut off.....ah well dont dq me on some gay shit |
naw...no DQ....buut...u need to work man. i came easy...and it looks like a win for me, but goodlooks.... keep it up
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lmao your structure is horrible and your punches are weak and played...its an easy win for me
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Voted For: Wes City
Im pretty 100% Da Mahnster bit his verse Plus, all his personals were fake, didnt have any punches, and the multies kinda sucked. New Method has picked up another easy win. |
wtf......i bit my verse?? ahaha....are u insane... and how are the personals fake??? ...wwwwwwoooooowww im smelling dickride 100%.....
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Voted For: Wes City
Da Mahnster I'd have to perform a sayonce to "See-ya-Post" might as well dissapear cuz u "DROPP'N GHOST"// cant 'beat-me' to get this "SEA-MEN-CLOSE" u aint a rapper, just "Dreaming-Shows"// Another double bar style. Blah wordplay and ok punch. you best 'choke' like you "Toung-Tied" Ya rhymes arent hot if shit "Sun-Fried"// Why you STUNT GUY?? now u best RETIRE and finish liek "DA-Alumni"//(Only skilless) No. Bad punch. your "Barz-show" you spinning out more than "Car-showz" CITY?? u aint "LARGE BRO"// You finished...i aint coming "HARD-THO"...for you today would be a "SMART CHOKE"// Self glorification, ok attempt at a personal. Cant Graduate-Here , I Saturate-ears, Wes 'cant pass flow', he don't PUMP-NO-FEAR// 214 postz 0 Winz!! ...u better "UP FOR YEARZ",dont " Pump no Tearz" not 1 bar from u gon "PUMP NO CHEERS"// Wordplay is getting old. Overall bad punch and bad attempt at a personal. Overall, you are trying to win on wordplay and no real punches. Only 2 personal attempts, both failed. Work on forming real punches and not just wordplay. Wes City Ya lines are pre-school kid, im the one to haunt ya Cause after 3rd grade no ones been afraid of monstahs Hint of self glorification, but nice personal in the 2nd line. Give it up your not gangsta bitch, so jus stop-be I know for a fact Mis-spelling is not a thug hobbie Eh, wasn't feeling this punch. Im known to murder kids, while you just known as a bore Ill Drown you in a lake and leave ya ass dead for shore Blah wordplay, and hint of self glorification again. Overall, your personal won it for you mostly. Cuz at least the few punches you had hit somewhat. Bit of self glorification though so be sure to check that. My vote goes to Wes City cuz of his punches and personals. Though he didn't have as many, his hit harder then da mahnsta's wordplay attempts. v- Wes City |
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Well, for one thing Wes City has 4 wins, not zero. |
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Personals are fake because: He has 4 wins, not 0, and he had more posts at the time then what you claimed. Fake personals like that lead to biting suspitions anyways, but Ive also seen that exact verse on another site a while back, I just dont remember whice one Lol at me riding New Method... Thats what the Revelation is for :love: |
This was feedback posted for Wes City
VOTE DA MAHNSTER:: More complex everything, creative
good drop ina short amount of time, decent personal attempts considering. |
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