Vick Slate vs Valor
Battle Rules: CREW BATTLE
(TEXT) M.alicious M.ilitary M.entality vs. Undestructable Emcees 6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 07-25-05 at 12:25 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Valor has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-05 10:20 PM.
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Vick Slate has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-23-05 12:16 PM.
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Heaven
the painted sky's of the world, lights gleam through cloudy wholes where angels laugh during day conversations, and rest there peaceful souls where demons of the underworld, cry do to the lack of no freedom where the lords most loyal spirits play, look closely you will see them they are that sparkle in your eye, and that special kiss of sensation the vivid thoughts in your mind, that give you that happy inspiration that is where i pray, that my loving soul returns to on decision hour hoping for a spot in heaven where the air is sweet, no where near sour where evil is no where to be found, i am safe in thou saviors arms cant help but to smile, at the fact that IM enjoyed by the great ones charm but at this moment, heaven awaits holy and silently during my absence not knowing if my soul is healthy enough to get in, we will see what happens if not i shall be saddened, due to the fact i haven't got to enjoy gods presence haven't got to set and speak with him, or except any of his life lessons so i sat here on the porch, gazing upon the beautiful empty navy blue sky i have all these questions that need answered, and i have not a clue why Just to say that if one day I make it to that kingdom, I'll become a legend another story told, for a young man, who on a glorious day made it.... to heaven |
did he make his due date?
if not i'm not wasting a good verse |
Voted For: Valor
Other dude didn't post a verse.................... |
Holy land fulfilled with angels and unicorns,
Eventually u have prayed to go there since u were born, All mighty above that has our souls n love sleeps there, Victorious over satan the national known reeper, Evening falls people all over put their hands together to pray. Now can u wash my sins away, so I can make it to heaven one day. my vote goes to valor.....on the real I didn't try n didn't want to try...got bigger shitt going on |
lol i dropped my verse 2 days before it was due you lame ass......uppiing for an easy win
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Voted For: Valor
Valor- Ahhh Nice imagery and emotion good shit ish. I liked the concept most def. THe vocab was good. But the Concepts was just decent w/ the emotion and the Imagery. Good. VS Nothing (Vick Slate) I didnt feel he had nothin going on, it was short, had Imagery. The emotion wasn't there. V/Valor cause Of coming harder with lots of emotion and imagery chea Return a favor in my battle with Black~Magic...Chea |
O and Yeah..Your down for a rematch valor?............
I beat you once...Wouldnt hurt if we battled again eh? |
Voted For: Valor
A clearly one-sided battle....Valor your verse was good...nothing spectacualr but u didn't need a monster to take this one...good flow, structure, vocab, imagerythe whoel 9...good shit son VIck....wtf was u thinking....u barely posted anything....u had nothing in ther eu jus rambled...seems like u didn't care an jus gvae valor the win....I aint even gotta explain this more Vote : Valor |
Voted For: Valor
no contest here... vick- you obviously aint try... shit looks like you whipped it up in a few mins your flow wasnt bad, but the lyrics could have been a lot bettter... you didnt really try at all.. valor- on the other hand, you DID try i think... your shit was very well thought out, therefore improving your lyrics... i love the complexity in some of your lines, just enough to add a lil touch to it, but not too much to make it seem fake and forced... only a few times i have seen that pulled off before...its always too much of too little, props... good flow on the whole thing, although i found maybe one or two lines that were somewaht stretched... good lyrics again, i think you had this in the bag before it even started... v/ valor |
Voted For: Valor
V/Valor due 2 containing everything thats needed to win a topical Kinda like Vick Slate didnt even try... this was a waist of Credits... Vote.....Valor |
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