Porn identity has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-05 02:10 PM.

Originality has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-05 02:13 PM.

you kick no wit. what makes you think you'll win? bitch just quit.
but on the real kid. i'll take you under my wing - since thats where the propellor is.
oh, you're bad to the bone? well then you must be wack to the core.
i won't go facial. & call you pig ugly just to hint you're a bore/boar.
when i swing you'll slam the deck. i'll end your battle cry w/ a kleenex.
have you seeing stars. you don't want war? make do like boba & jet.
o can't fend. so 5 - 0 inevitably is how this story will end.
& send you from ashes to ashes - like this threads a crematorium.

voila.
i'm not going to explain. so don't get it? don't vote..

Voted For: Porn identity

you kick no wit. what makes you think you'll win? bitch just quit.
but on the real kid. i'll take you under my wing - since thats where the propellor is.
oh, you're bad to the bone? well then you must be wack to the core.
i won't go facial. & call you pig ugly just to hint you're a bore/boar.

vs.

nothin

wow orginatlity ya shit reall didnt make sense, buying an air conditioner is the only way you have fans....an air conditionar isnt a fan....you shoulda said all your fans are on the ceiling or somethin that made sense

porn got this for harder punches and better creativity....

v/PI

Voted For: Originality

Meh, Origionality won this in my opinion..
Both of ya rhyme schemes need work but I guess this is just a quick text battle so yous prolly wernt trying that hard.. Basically origionality came with better punchlines.. Porn identity..Your stuff wasnt bad bro, you just got slightly out-done in this one..

Decent battle for a quick one..goodstuffnahmsayingkpeacebye

I actually have an air con thing sitting right infront of me that has a fan in it..

yea but is an air conditionar a fan....nah its an air conditionar....yea my AC has a fan in it but id have to open the unit up...and also in my eyes PI won but you dont agree with that soo...one mans opinion to the other..

Voted For: Originality

V/Originality.......this was a good battle...but orig came wit better punchs an structure also some personals an good wordplay....porn u had an ight verse....u came to basic punchs were stretched an where a little played...No Hate....work on those things....RETURN THE FAVOR....(Or i'll get this vote removed an u'll never get another honest vote from me agian....)
Opener=o
Closer=o
vocab=o
punchs=o
multi's=none really
personals=o
wordplay=o
structure=o
Overall=Originality

erm. young you should elaborate a bit more. 1 - 2 to you.

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Voted For: Originality

aight man almost even but i think originality got this one.
he had some hard personals that won me over.
porn work on your personals try to attack him more using what he got against him like he did to u.
work on that and ull be aight

return the favor honestly please both of u
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199108

that battle is closed so return the favor here both of u
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200482

why are all the shit voters voting in our battle. lol.