RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Poetic Scriptures (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9)
-   -   .Artik Phrost & Khatharsis Presents: "A Fiegn Of Face" (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201373)

Artik Phrost 07-23-05 01:26 PM

.Artik Phrost & Khatharsis Presents: "A Fiegn Of Face"
 
Khatharsis....Followed by Artik Phrost

.A Feign Of Face.

If its what i want to hear and need
So i'm not fed with lies
Why does it hurt so much so i bleed inside
So whatevers left of me dies

There is no good choice
Whether to trust
The decieving voice
That rips me open and adjusts

My mind with pain
So i cant take it any longer
So my thoughts are forever stained
With no more strength im not stronger

The truth or lies?

Which is worse
There is no difference
Which hurts more in reverse
No ending or entrence
No stop

I Look Into Your Eyes And Truth Corrodes My Mind
How Can One’s Lips Play The Sweetest Melodies
…Underneath The Bass Of The Sweetest Lie?

Its Like You’re Talking Without Guidance Or Cause
Your Mouth Sales The Story Like Business Matter
…Yet Your Iris Campaigns Whats Not Written On Walls

And Even Though Its Clear, I Still believe Every Word
Just Block Out The Picture Stored Deep Within
…You Don't Love Me, But Me Not Loving You Is Absurd

As If Telling The Truth Would Really Ease Pressure
I Want To Know or Feel No More, So I Guess
…I Want To Hear Goodness And None-the-Lesser
‘Than a Feign of Face’

Artik Phrost 07-23-05 01:27 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201244

Acuity 07-23-05 04:11 PM

Thankyou for going by link rule :thumbuP: ....ill feedback on this l8r...

SoLe 07-24-05 07:25 AM

i liked this poem a lot....... i liked how the rhyme scheme was set up....good imagery.....i wrote a peice like this before its on my computer ill find it.....ill hit ya's up and we'll do a collab or something...the poem was hott..

9/10

*uno


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:17 AM.