Chalk Clorox vs Drakel
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Hate

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-24-05 at 06:42 PM

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Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-23-05 07:51 PM.

word, take a look at this first, to get most of my shit

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190779

match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say
so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?
even if he wasnt queer, wouldn't listen to what this faggot called me
cause im not takin anyone seriously looking like dragon ball Z
have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw
only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras
whack is in his system, wishin he wasn't, but with him its a fuckin virus
so is losing something you like then....or is it the luck of the irish
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gl.

Chalk Clorox has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-23-05 08:11 PM.

nah, i didn't pre-write this, i got really gunned last night, woke up at 1 o'clock and then decided to set up those two battles....wrote that in like a half hour though, just cause im kinda tired

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

man to he has suffered a nother loss u had a better verse entirely keep it up

Voted For: Drakel

match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say
so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away
have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw
only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras

vs

NOTHIN...... ur last bar woulda been real hard hittin...... like 2 years ago.... i dont think Chalk expected to win this battle anyways if u see his openin line about not bein able to battle for shit....

Almost every category goes to Drakel includin punches, personals and structure... i guess Chalk had alil flow to it altho the structure was god awful... this battle was pretty one-sided in my opinion

V/Drakel

word, i hear that.....use to be like that when i started......wordness to your effort though.

keep up.

Voted For: Drakel

good battle ya heard

best opening by Drakel:
match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say
so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away
Nice wordplay

Weak closing by chalk boy:
i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse,
i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse
a punch but not hard

Best line:
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?
Nice bar goin on

Weakest line:
have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw
only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras
No rhyme....didnt seem like a puch...ya need to elevate a tiny bit





















Overall vote is to Drakel