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"Grand Finale" Ft. Spoken Word, Opt1k, Artik Phrost
[Talking:Tony Green]
Yeah niggaz lets Go......... [Verse1:Opt1k] there's times in life you can see the end. a loaded guncocked back which u cant defend. and with all these ters drippin city cries out questions under full pressure which intends power suggestions all these bithes could rot all on the floor cuz my inner most feeling?!o dont care anymore all others act stupid reactin fakes and pretends my eye's sealed shut til its all real again then all tryna cope with the ups and downs everyody in pain tryna deal with the sounds many thoughts rushin through a pictures drawn cant do much at all til the pain is gone cruel intentions criminal minds,the bad past of me criminal memories rush as the ink from my pen bleeds. [Verse2:Spoken Word] Ive been rapping since rap was just something to do But now im getting dope, spitting something at you Im true to the game, writting shit thatll bury you cats Talking like you a gangsta, but yall scared of the gats You fake MC's stay hidden like the hairs on my ass Stop talking, Aint no way that im aware of your past I lock and load, pop and go, youll be hearing the blast Stay low, dont ya know, or Ill be clearing your stash Im on another level, stay away cause im busting loose Yall trying to catch up, but this aint duck duck goose I got labels looking to sign me, but im too dope to choose Like tightwalking with no net, ya'll all on a rope to lose Im still the best and you know i run with a ruthless crew That'll leave ya walking around with just a tooth or two [Verse3:Artik Phrost] …This Marks The End Of Ya Simple Ways And A Start Of A New Era New Swear Of Heads Keying Punches Two By Two Like Noah Paired Um!!.. …A Style Kewl An’ Airy, For Yall Yeah Its Scary; How Im So Care Free Cuz Yall ‘Brim Lactose Intolerant’; While I’m Parallel To ‘Ledge An Dairy’!!.. …An’ DoContinue Talks Trash; No Wonder That’s All Yu Bring To The Menu So I Present To The Venue: 'Its True Good Things Eventually End', So..Please..Do Continue!!.. …Yeah, I Got KO’d Twice In The League; But Im Still The Head To Beat Cuz Truth Be Told I Made A Whole Crew Either Contradict Themselves Or Admit Being Scared Of Me!!.. …See My Actions Speak, So Listen Cuz Realli Yu Herbs Have Yet To Learn Text Is Deeper Than Structure, So I ‘Cremate Bars’; Its A ‘Hard Lesson Urned’!!.. …I Brought Ya ‘Food For Thought’ And Ya’ll Took The ‘Bulemic Route’ I’ll ‘Spare No Feelings Now’; Hint Towards AP An’ Watch How Ya ‘Nerve Evens Out’!!.. [Verse4:Tony Green] (Who the fuck is that) Its Tony Green mothafucker. (Dressed in all black) I'm on the scene mothafucker. With some seen mothafuckers,bout to bleed mothafucker. Glocks ring mothafucker, till you scream mothafucker. See your brains will splat, I'm ready for that. 25 feet with a gat I shoot better than T-Mac. Let you say what you say let you think what you think. Cause when it all goes down you gone learn shit really do stink. Cause niggaz shells ah fly probably make you cry. You wantin no more drama like you Mary J Blidge. A gangsta's story nigga I'm the sequel. I'm somethin like TO the way I fly like a Eagle. Nigga I'm a head bussa no problem to hid the scraps. Nigga I swing bats like my name was Big Mac. Niggaz begging for Encore's like my name Slim Shady. I pitty you bitch niggaz like abandoned babies. I got Hollywood status like I came from Cali. Tony Green checkin out in this mafucking Grand Finale. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201095 |
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Theirs the link uppin hot joint!!!!!!
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[Verse1:Opt1k]
there's times in life you can see the end. a loaded guncocked back which u cant defend....... Opt1k your verse was simple but o.k.....you need to up your vocab and improve your structure.....try to make each line near enough the same length...your verse didn't lack in enotion tho and i felt this was your strongest point....therefore expand on this and include more in your verse [Verse2:Spoken Word] Ive been rapping since rap was just something to do But now im getting dope, spitting something at you spoken word....a good verse from you...nice flow...some funny lines....here and there and you also had metaphors as well....good verse..keep it up [Verse3:Artik Phrost] …This Marks The End Of Ya Simple Ways And A Start Of A New Era New Swear Of Heads Keying Punches Two By Two Like Noah Paired Um!!.. Artik phrost....really like your style...this is the second piece of writing i've read from you and i think your real good....too many good lines to mention and metaphors were real nice....punches were hot also....get at me bout a collab sometime Verse4:Tony Green] (Who the fuck is that) Its Tony Green mothafucker. (Dressed in all black) I'm on the scene mothafucker. T.......an o.k verse but i've seen better from you....i think you used too much repitition....your flow was off at some points also...anyway all in all a nice piece and ya'll styles of writing worked well together....i look forward to more from all of you........ |
Thanxx lil mama uppin fo more feed!
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Uppin to the top!
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this was fire
singularly i liked third n forth verse best 2nd verse was good t dont get it twisted first verse was not much on its own but was the perfect set up for the tempo, vibe, feeling n just, total mindset of the song...great placements wit da verses most yall need vocab, but thats just my preference mad niggas are simple lyricaly but nasty at story telling n punchlines n shit like that./..so i took it for what it was and enjoyed alot...hot shit! chek my O.M.....its called Hate on this |
iight thanxx uppin to the top gimme a link to your om!
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damnnnnnnn fiya dawg artik phrost took that shit to another level yo opt1k came better thanusual not to hard but aight spoken word was hot to tony green u did your thing nice collab
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[Verse3:Artik Phrost]
…This Marks The End Of Ya Simple Ways And A Start Of A New Era New Swear Of Heads Keying Punches Two By Two Like Noah Paired Um!!.. …A Style Kewl An’ Airy, For Yall Yeah Its Scary; How Im So Care Free Cuz Yall ‘Brim Lactose Intolerant’; While I’m Parallel To ‘Ledge An Dairy’!!.. …An’ DoContinue Talks Trash; No Wonder That’s All Yu Bring To The Menu So I Present To The Venue: 'Its True Good Things Eventually End', So..Please..Do Continue!!.. …Yeah, I Got KO’d Twice In The League; But Im Still The Head To Beat Cuz Truth Be Told I Made A Whole Crew Either Contradict Themselves Or Admit Being Scared Of Me!!.. …See My Actions Speak, So Listen Cuz Realli Yu Herbs Have Yet To Learn Text Is Deeper Than Structure, So I ‘Cremate Bars’; Its A ‘Hard Lesson Urned’!!.. …I Brought Ya ‘Food For Thought’ And Ya’ll Took The ‘Bulemic Route’ I’ll ‘Spare No Feelings Now’; Hint Towards AP An’ Watch How Ya ‘Nerve Evens Out’!!.. [Verse4:Tony Green] (Who the fuck is that) Its Tony Green mothafucker. (Dressed in all black) I'm on the scene mothafucker. With some seen mothafuckers,bout to bleed mothafucker. Glocks ring mothafucker, till you scream mothafucker. See your brains will splat, I'm ready for that. 25 feet with a gat I shoot better than T-Mac. Let you say what you say let you think what you think. Cause when it all goes down you gone learn shit really do stink. Cause niggaz shells ah fly probably make you cry. You wantin no more drama like you Mary J Blidge. A gangsta's story nigga I'm the sequel. I'm somethin like TO the way I fly like a Eagle. Nigga I'm a head bussa no problem to hid the scraps. Nigga I swing bats like my name was Big Mac. Niggaz begging for Encore's like my name Slim Shady. I pitty you bitch niggaz like abandoned babies. I got Hollywood status like I came from Cali. Tony Green checkin out in this mafucking Grand Finale. Those Two Verses The best shit ive seen In a while Shit was mad crazy You should get mad feed on this man Realy good shit 10/10 NICE STUYFF |
word those verses were hot
uppin this for fam |
ayo uppin this collab its hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Got potions galore on the oceans floor and got the shores hugged keen Don’t want enemy ships getting the identity Of my script Because my quotes don’t float on boats but yet make people trip It could make a guy panic like the titanic sink his pride for obscenity Yeah always find whack ID’S in a stack of MC’S headed to my vicinity Peep clever and heap together some love rap wanna hug ASAP, so girl your butt is brown and its cut round and snub Girl I want cake” but MADD I don’t date see you later cuz” "Aw boo don’t go" |
man post a damn feed not no wack drop homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!RPFLMFAO@^^^!!!!!!!!!
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