Still Motion vs soul?uest
 

Battle Rules:

15 Lines Max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Topic - Random Content Displaces Dreams

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-27-05 at 09:02 PM

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Still Motion has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 09:03 PM.

soul?uest has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 09:12 PM.

when the night came and I slept all cozy between the sheets,
nobody could do anything to try and mess up my dreams,
pink elephants dancing on clouds of molded gumdrops,
me making out with my third grade teacher wearing knee-high socks,
somehow I find it erotic…I mean I find it ironic,
how one can have such good looking baggage and remain platonic,
simply put my eyes deceived me and she wasn’t a purple dinosaur,
so as she looked somewhere over the rainbow i fucked that whore,
about that time skittles popped out of two places kiddies,
you don’t wanna know where…the secret flavor stays hidden,
like a little kitten…I prowled around in search of more delinquency,
as I was on one knee I found that giants always want to frequent me,
so you see…that’s how I came to be in this place with this tandem,
me, myself, and I caught sleeping…here cause content was random…

10 minutes key. goodluck. im rusty.

When the cruel smoke climbs to the brim of your eyes
Provoking tears to seep through your little disguise
People can see them, your visage isn’t plastered with plastic
Your soul in agony from the thought of a habit
Makin a straight face, you say it’s the wind chillin your bones
While chillin with your friends, minds are stoned
You weren’t prude, having kissed the lips of a blunt
Peer pressure, word ranging from pussy and cunt
Took your first pull, and your mind ripped away from this world

You spoke to me…

“Man I’m gunna hit it big, I know fa sho...
Be like Tupac and sign Death Row…
And be like Weed is nice bitch!
Look at my chains! Im rich!”

Acting out his performance, the stage is the street
But a car comes, and it turns into a tragic comedy
You let random thoughts displace your dreams…

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Voted For: soul?uest

better everything you get the win hands down i like this good job! lol

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Word good battle homie.... Bumpin for fam