Doc Holiday vs Seduction
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Seduction has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 03:56 PM.

Fucka doc he aint nuthin but a washed up new kid prayin to be noticed
but hows he expect to get noticed, wen he cant keep the voters focused
your verse'll go un noticed, cos to the eyes it be saw son
How u goin to be called holiday?cos battling u feels like one
fuck this cunt, he be new to RV and be bringing the site down
with a name like doc holiday, what have i left to clown?
my verse be weak but yours is just weaker...so wat do i do?
give this bitch on how to right verse?or just finish him with a 1-2?
Imma do both, kid u suck next time dont attempt to be dope
cos the only time u be dope,is wen u risen from a punch which leaves u next to the pope




omg that sucked horribly

Doc Holiday has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 10:28 AM.

Ya shit is all sloppy, how you gone stop me, dog you a fraud a man in a brauds body, pussy when you ready reply, if you ready to die, you can get it to the red in ya eye, shit, i'm one hell of a guy, fly pelican fly, and get shot out the motherfuckin sky, bitch i'm a beast ask ya motherfuckin moms, i fuck her from behind, when i cum i tell her by.

I'm a tell ya like this, nigga i'm da champ, da man, scram, my shit is in demand, and, homey you a never when this here so get shit clear you nothin but a limp dick queer, and ya bitch she can suck shit rite, but the stretch marks on her ass look like thunder strikes, so nigga when you want her back, send the kid a couple stacks, i send the bitch home horseback wearing a lumber jack, what you got to fuck wit that, nigga this is war, i'm the nigga in the war, that uh when the shit fa sure, nigga talk greasy i'm a find ya ass, real fine and fast i ain't fond of fags, fag, homophobic ain't the way to be, but you a mo bro so keep that away from me, i ain't amused by ya weak ass flow, or ya metaphores, i'm out betta pray you the prey i'm the predatore.

Voted For: Doc Holiday

you got my vote cuz you had better rhyming words
his delivery was bad
and you should start explaining some of the stuff that you say cause a few of those lines didn't make sense

bwahaha wackity :P

anyways uppin the shit im ashamed of

lol @ him being up 1-0

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Voted For: Doc Holiday

weak battle but one sided

Flow - for some reason Doc Holliday... his weird ass structure was soundin iight 2 me...structure definately needs work tho...put that shyt into barz n u'll b str8...seduction u was all over the place...try to even ur barz out some feel me ?

Punches - Doc Holiday...his shyt hit alot harder...that stretch marks shyt was better then any punch seduction tried to thro...seduction u was askin alotta questions n not really gettin at doc...come stronger son cuz that last punch was horrendous

Metaphors - blahhh neither...both verses were pretty simple....thas why this battle was wack...both of yall need to step ya game up

Multis - none.. period !

Structure - Seduction... doc was all over the place...hard to realize where 1 bar stopped and another 1 begins...seduction's verse was easy 2 read but the flow still was connectin !

finally...Seduction if u rite that ur verse was wack then obviously ppl are gna agree wit u....sounds like u was expectin to lose...ur verse was wack but Docs' wasnt much better !...have confidence in ur shyt son !.... but

Vote - Doc Holiday


yall can return the favor on the battle in my sig... good look

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Voted For: Doc Holiday

yo i vote for you becuz u had better punches....seduction ur punches were kinda played...no hate though......doc rtf on my om Masked Disguise please v/doc holiday

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