Mike McGuire vs flow verse
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-28-05 at 10:52 PM

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Mike McGuire has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 09:35 PM.

flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 09:40 PM.

You "ass" is where you mouth should be thats y ur flow is shit . . .
Even with the last name “McGuire” you still couldn’t make a “hit” . . .

I know you think you can spit but don’t forget even shit floats . . .
But only if i cut you will you every be able to flow (blood--get it) . . .

If your rhymes was chocolate it couldn’t fill an M&M . . .
Your "posts" wouldn’t be worthy if your were a "mail man" . . .

He thinks he’s RV's "big fish" all cause he loves to “master-bate”(get it) . . .
Might take him long to understand i won cause like retarded children-- he's always late. . . .

This kid got constipation flow in his ass all blockd up/
He cant spit shit out of it, might as well throw it up(vomit)/
He had to stick an ENEMA in his buttcrack, just to flow/
Dialin 911 just to be rescued from me, now he got da 5-O/
Dis fuckin cry baby gonna die from diarreha cuz he cant control it/
How is this kid a pimp when he gets breastfed from his mom left tit/
Now hes cryin cuz he got WEAK lines and a WEAK life/
I know, cuz i murdered that bitch with just a butter knife/
Before I did, he asked how to spit flows marked X-Rated/
I told him to spit flows more fluid then bein constipated/

ENAMA = X-Lax that goes in ur ass
5-O = Police
Constipation flow = no flow

Alright ppl lets get these votes in . . . comon . . . THANKS

Voted For: flow verse

You "ass" is where you mouth should be thats y ur flow is shit . . .
Even with the last name “McGuire” you still couldn’t make a “hit” . . .
^^^Ok personal......1st line played
I know you think you can spit but don’t forget even shit floats . . .
But only if i cut you will you every be able to flow (blood--get it) . . .
^^^we ain't stupuid...we will get it...played out shit too
If your rhymes was chocolate it couldn’t fill an M&M . . .
Your "posts" wouldn’t be worthy if your were a "mail man" . . .
^^^NO........whack
He thinks he’s RV's "big fish" all cause he loves to “master-bate”(get it) . . .
Might take him long to understand i won cause like retarded children-- he's always late.
^^Played and again...we ain't stupuid...we will get it

OK.........stop with the (Get it).Essepecially when ya shit ain't really that complex.Your shit was played out.Very uncreative.Had some lines too short for flow.

This kid got constipation flow in his ass all blockd up/
He cant spit shit out of it, might as well throw it up(vomit)/
^^^Played out
He had to stick an ENEMA in his buttcrack, just to flow/
Dialin 911 just to be rescued from me, now he got da 5-O/
^^^NO.............
Dis fuckin cry baby gonna die from diarreha cuz he cant control it/
How is this kid a pimp when he gets breastfed from his mom left tit/
^^basic and whack..............
Now hes cryin cuz he got WEAK lines and a WEAK life/
I know, cuz i murdered that bitch with just a butter knife/
^^He still alive....so shut up.....whack line
Before I did, he asked how to spit flows marked X-Rated/
I told him to spit flows more fluid then bein constipated/
^^^SHut up.........Please

Reading your verse was antagonizing.Wordplay/metas....use it more.Ur shit suked man.Get some personals too.And wat with you with constipation/ass lines.All of urs were played and whack.

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Voted For: flow verse

ok..Mike u cant talk about constipation all throughout a verse its jsut stupid man....so in other words my vote goes to flow cuz harder punches and I think he jsut came harder really..keep writing guys

Voted For: flow verse

Aii

this is a good battle you both had me rollin this is a tough decision to make but ima say that Flow verse toke this battle

Explanation

Flow
You "ass" is where you mouth should be thats y ur flow is shit . . .
Even with the last name “McGuire” you still couldn’t make a “hit” . . .
....Decent....
I know you think you can spit but don’t forget even shit floats . . .
But only if i cut you will you every be able to flow (blood--get it) . . .
...>Good<...
If your rhymes was chocolate it couldn’t fill an M&M . . .
Your "posts" wouldn’t be worthy if your were a "mail man" . . .
.....>Good<....
He thinks he’s RV's "big fish" all cause he loves to “master-bate”(get it) . . .
Might take him long to understand i won cause like retarded children-- he's Always Late
....>Decent<....

Overall man I Think That Your verse was a Good verse had nice flow I read right threw it with no problems and then you had some nice punchez but your concepts were a lill played but still not that bad .....next time try to be more original with your concept and wordplay man Youll get far that way you have some raw talents man Keep it up

nice verse

Mike
This kid got constipation flow in his ass all blockd up/
He cant spit shit out of it, might as well throw it up(vomit)/
......Aii...
He had to stick an ENEMA in his buttcrack, just to flow/
Dialin 911 just to be rescued from me, now he got da 5-O/
Recyclin Concept man....This is the same Style from your first bar Thats bad to do man :nono:

Dis fuckin cry baby gonna die from diarreha cuz he cant control it/
How is this kid a pimp when he gets breastfed from his mom left tit/
Aii First line was again Like i said Recylced Concept from your previous lines and thats a :nono: and also Man Mama punchez are madly Played No hate or nuttin like that though

Now hes cryin cuz he got WEAK lines and a WEAK life/
I know, cuz i murdered that bitch with just a butter knife/
.......Aii....
Before I did, he asked how to spit flows marked X-Rated/
I told him to spit flows more fluid then bein constipated
...Recycin your concept manIll explain it under this

Overall man you really need to stop resayin the same kinda style like about constipation....you said stuff about constipation and shit in like half yo vcerse and that makes your verse played man and you dont want a played verse so try not to do that in the future try to be more original like man yo get me? and also dont put the / mark at the end of each line thats jus tacky ok NO HATE OR NUTTIN jus tellin you if nobody else does

RTF in my battle thats 4-0 or this vote gets removed

upping for vote . . . 2 more ppl . . thanks

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upping for votes . . two more ppl . .comon . . thanks

This was feedback posted for flow verse
 

DAMN MAN NICE DROP . . . U GOT THIS ONE WITH EASE . . . Mike McGuire . . . YOU NEED TO ELEVATE MAN

thanks for the votes and feed-back everyone . . one more vote . . . finish this off . . .come on people. . . lets do this . . . :thumbs up