one mic vs Mike McGuire
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-30-05 at 07:46 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 07:53 AM.
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yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me
cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy" often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow" when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show "Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile |
yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me
cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy" often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow" when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show "Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile 1st bar,2nd line- he did an OM called all controversy, and the lyrics didnt make sense 2nd bar, 1st line-flow verse and chaos are 2 of the people he's battlin at the moment 3rd bar, 1st line-"hello mello" woz another 1 of his OMs 4th bar, 1st line-he got a bad structure in some of his lyrics |
Mike McGuire has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 01:30 PM.
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I dont feel like wastin my time so ill make this verse brief
You got freestyles lined in ur computer like braces on teeth When you first asked to battle me, i was gonna decline and say NO But your just another WEAK kid who I'll be waitin for you to die slow Imma cut off you blood FLOW and turn it into a blood CLOT Hes tangled up of punchlines like a 5 year old shoestring knot You weak man, you should watch Coach Carter Will that movie make you act somewhat harder? I have to admit that those 2 lines was just plain WEAK Take it, it goes with your STYLE, its all yours to keep |
uppppppin in .........we need some voters to vote ...thnx
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tite verse MM, g'd luk. uppin.....................
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ya, you dropped a good verse too. uppin...........
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Voted For: one mic
One Mic: yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy" ^^good personal 7/10 often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow" when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show ^^good personal wack punch 4/10 "Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled ^^no 2/10 man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile ^^no 2/10 Overall: 15/40 (38%) Mike McGuire: I dont feel like wastin my time so ill make this verse brief You got freestyles lined in ur computer like braces on teeth ^^ehh 3/10 When you first asked to battle me, i was gonna decline and say NO But your just another WEAK kid who I'll be waitin for you to die slow ^^no 2/10 Imma cut off you blood FLOW and turn it into a blood CLOT Hes tangled up of punchlines like a 5 year old shoestring knot ^^alright 4/10 You weak man, you should watch Coach Carter Will that movie make you act somewhat harder? ^^no 1/10 I have to admit that those 2 lines was just plain WEAK Take it, it goes with your STYLE, its all yours to keep ^^ehh 3/10 Overall: 13/50 (26%) Vote: One Mic Return the favor with an honest vote on a battle in my sig or this vote will get removed |
Voted For: Mike McGuire
Flow-Basic rhyme shceme by both emcees.Structure was same by the both of you.So guess I'ma give it an even here. Punches-One Mic got the right idea goin after the dude's open mic.But the problem the 2 of you have is just stating shit..be indirect..use wordplay and metaphors.I gotta go with Mike Mcguire for having some punches that hit. Personals-One mic...no brainer.But his personals were weak.Mike outta work on this aspect a lot. Multis-Neither...as both of you sucked badly here.Ditch the basic rhyme shceme. Vocab-Same as multis.Improve here Originality-Mike...One mic had personals but didn't use them in a creative way.Neither of you were creastive though WEAK BATTLE Vote-Mike Mcguire VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202287 |
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