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Charades of the Pen and Paper (Pen N' Paper Diss)
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I pop a bottle myself Smoke weed by myself Do business by myself Fuck bitches by myself I could do what I wanna do im just gon die Ima thug inside cant u see through my eyes I'm watchin all of Rapverse don't you realize Let's play a game of charades, who am I? {VERSE1} Am i pen n paper... nope he dead now Blood in my eye bleeding through the eyebrow He's dead already.... .....no lifelines no medical support for him..... Now Sixth is ready..... ..... to take over the body and take him..... to the grim reaper black mask skull face The phrase m dazed the purple fuckin haze im killing myself or am i not..... Who want want who got shot im on the block wit his head And u still askin if hes dead Man thats his im my bag thats red So get up the glock and fill him wit lead And now its over his life has ended wit a shot in the heart..... .....and pen n paper is no more and sixth sense life has start...... {CHORUS} I pop a bottle myself Smoke weed by myself Do business by myself Fuck bitches by myself I could do what I wanna do im just gon die Ima thug inside cant u see through my eyes I'm watchin all of Rapverse don't you realize Let's play a game of charades, who am I? LINK - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201804 |
diz is nice not 2 say tha least but wut brought on diz 4 u 2 diss pen n paper well all i can say u got good keystyle techniques keep writing
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i am pen n paper......lol......^^^^^
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that shit flowed nicely..i loved the verse..shaky on the hook tho.didnt like it much. but everything else was nice..good shit man..
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cant beleive homie put out a diss on himself...........lol creative man it was nice
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^^yo thnx man yea i thought of it kinda like a new ego and its betta u kno...
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well the nas chorus wasnt original the verse was decent but i felt u aint come with full effort it was aight preety average but noting stood out besides the nas chorus....
add a few hard punches and diss him more.... decent drop thou.... 6.5/10 |
yeh man you shoulda come at yourself a whole lot harder.....shit i should reword that as there are a lot of pricks goin through puberty on this site...but w/e
good errr "diss" |
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