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Sixth Sense 07-29-05 11:00 AM

Charades of the Pen and Paper (Pen N' Paper Diss)
 
{CHORUS}
I pop a bottle myself
Smoke weed by myself
Do business by myself
Fuck bitches by myself

I could do what I wanna do im just gon die
Ima thug inside cant u see through my eyes
I'm watchin all of Rapverse don't you realize
Let's play a game of charades, who am I?


{VERSE1}
Am i pen n paper... nope he dead now
Blood in my eye bleeding through the eyebrow
He's dead already....
.....no lifelines no medical support for him.....
Now Sixth is ready.....
..... to take over the body and take him.....
to the grim reaper black mask skull face
The phrase m dazed the purple fuckin haze
im killing myself or am i not.....
Who want want who got shot
im on the block wit his head
And u still askin if hes dead
Man thats his im my bag thats red
So get up the glock and fill him wit lead
And now its over his life has ended wit a shot in the heart.....
.....and pen n paper is no more and sixth sense life has start......

{CHORUS}
I pop a bottle myself
Smoke weed by myself
Do business by myself
Fuck bitches by myself

I could do what I wanna do im just gon die
Ima thug inside cant u see through my eyes
I'm watchin all of Rapverse don't you realize
Let's play a game of charades, who am I?






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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201804

Payn 07-29-05 11:09 AM

diz is nice not 2 say tha least but wut brought on diz 4 u 2 diss pen n paper well all i can say u got good keystyle techniques keep writing

Sixth Sense 07-29-05 11:20 AM

i am pen n paper......lol......^^^^^

Lay-z 07-29-05 11:24 AM

that shit flowed nicely..i loved the verse..shaky on the hook tho.didnt like it much. but everything else was nice..good shit man..

Chris Stylez 08-04-05 02:03 AM

cant beleive homie put out a diss on himself...........lol creative man it was nice

AssasSINation 08-12-05 09:34 PM

^^yo thnx man yea i thought of it kinda like a new ego and its betta u kno...

icy-hot 08-13-05 06:38 AM

well the nas chorus wasnt original the verse was decent but i felt u aint come with full effort it was aight preety average but noting stood out besides the nas chorus....

add a few hard punches and diss him more....

decent drop thou....

6.5/10

WhoAmI 08-13-05 06:41 AM

yeh man you shoulda come at yourself a whole lot harder.....shit i should reword that as there are a lot of pricks goin through puberty on this site...but w/e

good errr "diss"


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