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Immense 07-29-05 06:18 PM

Immense - First Audio
 
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202003

leady 07-29-05 07:08 PM

iite lets see.. i dont like da beat.. very mainstream american.... ok yea first off id say find your style... cos it seems america is influence ALOT n it shudnt really be... drop on ukhhf.co.uk ... n jus peep as many dat as u can as often as u can.... it will bring out da UK MC in u... you flow on beat.. its a basic flow but its on beat so its a damn vgood start for a first time... confidence lacked in it.... dat comes wit practice so ya kno stick at it n confidence will build and ur delivery builds wit confidence... lyrics were kinda basic and also very american and u dropped an american twang :( try find ur uk accent ull sound alot better and alot more natural... lots of potential.. keep at it and keep practicin mate

Acuity 07-29-05 08:12 PM

ye ye wassup blud..long time...thought ur ass was dead or sumin, aint seen u on RV in tiiimmme..wats ya name on ukhhf?.....gd 2 c u stabbin @ audio again

listening as i type:

beat is real nice...feelin it...ya hittin da snares real nice..flowin real nice...lyrics on that gangsta tip..but yo jus cos u on that level blud dont mean you cant be creative try n b innovative in what marks you out from every other bre spittin bout the streets.....u soundin real grimey n rawkick em wid more aggression and itd sound real nice...im feeling this..you need betta quality, or betta mixin, i cn giv it a go 4 ya...get @ me...as 4 the UK accent thing dnt even watch that blud...i used to spit wid a thick twang...you'll loose it da more you spit...2 b honest im kinda likin dis...not tryin to inflate ur ego but dis was nice 4 ur 2nd audio blud...

get @ me 4 a collabo or sumin well tell dese breddaz watsup ya feel...peace :thumbup:

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Speats 07-30-05 05:15 PM

Beat is dope, flow is eee dont like it, mmm you dont really sound good on that type of beat, but seriously, for a first audio its pretty good

Key... 07-31-05 03:27 PM

*listenin while leavin feed*

beat is nice am feelin u can use it for a diss...

flow- monotone quality is iffy but u dont sound british fam, flow is there, needs upp presence a little..but mike tyson line..lol word holla at me we can get some shit craccin..


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