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tHa KiNG.D.HuG vs Macreep
Battle Rules:
6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO 4-1 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-29-05 at 11:04 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
tHa KiNG.D.HuG has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 10:35 PM.
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aiight this uh 6 line KO ...wont need much more
cuz this kid couldnt spit sikk lines if he got AIDS from uh whore now im not sure where this dude got off thinkin he was hot didnt your mama eva teach you it was bad to claim somethin that u not? so b4 its over ima bury u n ya aliases 6 feet deep cuz wut tha fuck is uh k-trini...oops i mean uh macreep??:huh: blah...set anotha 1 up tomorrow...10-20 lines... |
Macreep has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 10:45 PM.
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RV hate you,faggot,go somewhere else with your hot palm
Cause nobody go to bat for you,like Translyvania got bombed U good?,nah,and I dun have to write at a beachouse to be shore of it And You'd neva get urself on the map,like a massacred tourist This caps mouth be foaming too much,like he brush his teeth soapin ANd By now,I'd probably say I'ma eat you up .................................................. ..........but you'd spread ya legs open |
liked ya last lines but tha othas was madd whack....uppin
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No....it's just my last lines were the least complex and the others were wordplay.You just don't have it in you to get it.
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^naw...they jus didnt appeal much...tha beach 1=whack...and tha transylvania 1=whack...and that tourist shit ...wtf?!
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^^^umm........it was wordplay....something your verse needs....
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uppin dis hoe....will sum1 please shut k-trini up?!?!?!?
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Voted For: Macreep
damn, the closure in this won it for you...this si a good battle. solid punches, all the way thru. some nice originality in it aswell. retrun the favour.battle in sig. |
cool...uppin...see....i told u u had a nice closer...but ya otha shit was weak
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2 more votes for win #3...........................
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This was feedback posted for Macreep
this was a pretty weak battle right here besides Macreeps last bar....... this shit isnt worthy for either of yall...
V/Kelsick |
and no Macreep, he is tellin the truth that ur last bar was the only good thing...... for real, u had ok wordplay besides that bar but u didnt make them effective punches at the end....... no point for the w/p really if u cant put a hard hittin punch in there
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