S.P vs .Merkage.
 

Battle Rules:

5- 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
and etc

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-30-05 at 04:22 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

.Merkage. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-05 01:25 PM.

S.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-05 01:25 PM.

*walks in and see dis fake nigga named Merkage*

~u challenge me ta a battle i guess becuz were both beginners so we'll c who da winner~
~Merkage u a good contender neva the less a bad pretender~
~cut u up and put u in a salad as a chicken tenda and put ya family n a blenda~
~take'em out da blenda and give dem ta ya grandma ta drink fa her dinner~
~u a biter fo hire so i dont see why ya goofy ass enter dis~
~now i'm bout ta knock u out like Benerd Hopkins and have u lookn like McCally Cockins~

*walks out and waits fo da results*

Sp...annoying as hell this "Lil Roach" anit no ones consern "i almost missed him"
His battles are all infected..
So when this guy checks in it almost like theres a "Bug in the system"
"Elevate is the key to suceess?" look like your doors locked..
The only reason you "outshine most"
is when this dumbass buys "font glows" in the rapperz shop
"S"tupid "P"rick "S"top "P"ussy sorry trying to find the suitable name..
Sp used to be "Spiky"
Thats too bad At least he used to be "sharp" in the rap game
and what success yyou got homie u sleep on elevation like "naps on steps"
sorry to say
That this "pussy is too scary" I've seen "cats" wit better "reps"


if you don't understand don't vote

.Merkage.

up for votes

this was weak battle..........................

uppin dis bullshit!!!!!!!!!!!
bump dis shit up!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: .Merkage.

Sp...annoying as hell this "Lil Roach" anit no ones consern "i almost missed him"
His battles are all infected..
So when this guy checks in it almost like theres a "Bug in the system"
^^OK....neeed to set it up better
"Elevate is the key to suceess?" look like your doors locked..
The only reason you "outshine most"
is when this dumbass buys "font glows" in the rapperz shop
^^setup bad...but 1st line was hot
"S"tupid "P"rick "S"top "P"ussy sorry trying to find the suitable name..
Sp used to be "Spiky"
Thats too bad At least he used to be "sharp" in the rap game
^^OK.............
and what success yyou got homie u sleep on elevation like "naps on steps"
sorry to say
That this "pussy is too scary" I've seen "cats" wit better "reps"
^^OK.......

HAd a bunch of Ok punches.But wat I think you need is more personals and setup for your punches.90% of your verse needs to be made up of personals.And the set-up needs to be relevant to punchline.

~u challenge me ta a battle i guess becuz were both beginners so we'll c who da winner~
~Merkage u a good contender neva the less a bad pretender~
^^didn't rhyme well....set-up bad..
~cut u up and put u in a salad as a chicken tenda and put ya family n a blenda~
~take'em out da blenda and give dem ta ya grandma ta drink fa her dinner~
^^worded good....but str8 whack
~u a biter fo hire so i dont see why ya goofy ass enter dis~
~now i'm bout ta knock u out like Benerd Hopkins and have u lookn like McCally Cockins~
^^didn't flow good

OK...get rid of the ~ bullshit.That just makes ya shit newbish.You really need to work on wordplay and such.Set ya lines up better too.

Vote-Merkage
VOTE IN LINK BELOW
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202287

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
give me a vote plz

Voted For: .Merkage.

S.P:

~u challenge me ta a battle i guess becuz were both beginners so we'll c who da winner~
~Merkage u a good contender neva the less a bad pretender~
^^ehh 2/10
~cut u up and put u in a salad as a chicken tenda and put ya family n a blenda~
~take'em out da blenda and give dem ta ya grandma ta drink fa her dinner~
^^lmao wack 0/10
~u a biter fo hire so i dont see why ya goofy ass enter dis~
~now i'm bout ta knock u out like Benerd Hopkins and have u lookn like McCally Cockins~
^^no 2/10

Overall: 4/30 (13%)


.Merkage.:

Sp...annoying as hell this "Lil Roach" anit no ones consern "i almost missed him"
His battles are all infected..
So when this guy checks in it almost like theres a "Bug in the system"
^^decent meta 4/10
"Elevate is the key to suceess?" look like your doors locked..
The only reason you "outshine most"
is when this dumbass buys "font glows" in the rapperz shop
^^no 1/10
"S"tupid "P"rick "S"top "P"ussy sorry trying to find the suitable name..
Sp used to be "Spiky"
Thats too bad At least he used to be "sharp" in the rap game
^^no 2/10
and what success yyou got homie u sleep on elevation like "naps on steps"
sorry to say
That this "pussy is too scary" I've seen "cats" wit better "reps"
^^good closer 5/10

Overall: 12/40 (30%)


Return the favor with an honest vote on a battle in my sig or this vote will get removed.

up...............

merkage.......return the favor by tommorow at 8 PM or my vote will be removed

Voted For: S.P

seen as your opponent went over the line limit that gives you the win automatically.
but.........

Id still give you the vote even if he didnt cause..

your rhymes are more smooth, they flow thru nicley.your punches are good. alot better than your opponents.

retrun the favour.link in sig.

uppin once mo fo 4 mo votes
uppin help ya fam out

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