your boy
 

your boy new to the site, some of u who knowin' me,
know me to be the one Who?* Different* killin' wit' poetry,
was on the original site but decided of course
i gotta do the new one 2 and keep reppin' tru for the Short,
soldier eternal, 1st gun up to report,
u don't believe me?, just check out my battle wit' Dork,
good lookin' to the few who givin' me feedback,
love or a swift kick, whichever i need that,
to get my creative juices flowin' the truth is i'm knowin',
i'm the hottest thing that's not in a booth that's still flowin',
kill em' wit' line after line but i still ain't signed,
po' from the C-O, can't afford the studio time,
so i drop poetry online to be read by the best,
real recognizes real the truest of tests,
feed u my soul thru my poems when my mind is a mess,
and u feedback when i decide to get shit off my chest.

-Chip, good lookin' on feedback of any nature

*stuff i already posted on this or the original site

nice flow... rhymes was amature... no hate tho... try not usin so many puncuations they make for a hard read.. overall 5/10 no hate.. keep writin elevate

please return tha favor on this OM id really appreciate it
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...2323&styleid=14