.Merkage. vs BlueShift
 

Battle Rules:

5 Barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-05 at 08:36 AM

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BlueShift has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-05 08:50 AM.

Yo, Im a "Lyrikill~Assassin" coz I'm "ASSASSINATIN~YA~LYRICALLY" after "assessin~ya~lyrics", i'm rippin~ya....LITERALLY!// KILLIN~ME? Ya gotta be "KIDDIN~ME" how else ya gonna be "SONNIN~ME?" ***....nuke ya off "DA~PLANET" dat's tha only fuckin way your gonna be "UPPIN V's!" lol//*** I'll "lay~ya~flat" like "FLOOR~BOARD'Z" cause ya crew aint got a "heart~beat" between them...like fuckin "MORGUE~whoreZ!" lol//*** I "FLOOR~BOREZ" but a game of "KNUCKLES" is tha only time you could "RAP~HARD"***...RETARD!...I spit so "SICK" I "infect" my own fuckin "Hewlett~Packard!" lol// DRUG~LORD??....pffft, tha only time this mummy boyZ "on"~"line" is when he's "tappin~away" at his "KEYBOARD!" lol//*** You a "KEY~DORK"*** I'll put'cha head against ya sig for "TARGET~PRACTICE!"*** ....u cant "touch~this" like ya had ya "handZ~amputatin"...."SPASTIK!" // L.A gettin "EXCITED" about tha win like "TEEN~HORMONEz" but forget it coz ma verse just left a "ringin in ya head"...like "annoyin~store~phoneZ!" lol//

.Merkage. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-05 10:42 AM.

I juss don't get you if battles were "test" i don't know if you'll "pass"...
And ya avy dosent make u cool
Sorry Homie to tell da truth it's make u look more of an "ass"
And "Vida" not gonna make ya bars "prettier" if anything you'll ruin this
and you winning this
Is kinda like ya rapperz profile played out and "Ludacris"
"5 bucks" that not enuff to get a clue and thats what you'll need
this kid not fuckin around
No i mean it honestly A "fingernail" in his "cemen" was his "latest seed"
Blue why do u insist to suck I've see ya spits mn neva see crap
fuckin dummy
would put elmers glue on his keyboard so he culd "stick to rap"
But homie take this as advice tha rap rap game anit doing nothing.....
for you that is
So you betta wipe the crayola marks off ya keyboard buttons.

if you don't understand plz don't vote.....

Voted For: .Merkage.

Aii This is How it Goes

Merkage
Man All You really need to do is learn How to correct your Structure man the shit is sloppy like baby daipers after a long shit .lol. So work On That other than that your verse was coo you got some nice wordplay and thats good som,es nice punchez to go with your wordplay and thats good but ................You dont have any personals thats no big deal yet bcuz the guy is a newb but yet you should always try to include atleast one personal in a battle always you never know how that will help you man so next time try to include a personal or sumthing like that man ok
overall i think that you win So you get my v/Merkage

Blueshift
Man your lines werent a verse it was a paragraph and I really couldnt tell if you did 5 barz or 5 stanza's ..........and when i did read it it had some played wordplay and concept man and thats not really good to see win you tryin to win a battle i dont have much to say about your verse except try to fix ya structure and try to come more original next time

my v/ merkage

RTF in my Battle link or this gets removed

Aye merkage RTF in my battle man its a 3-0 Ko and its 2-0 now with me up lol

So Hit that up man

And please make it explained

Voted For: .Merkage.

flow-Blueshift because he it kinda seemed he put lines together simply because they rhyme.He had a very ugly structure though.But he had flow

Punches-One sidely MErkage due to the fact Blueshift seemed to be caught up in flow.But neither cats had dope punches here.

Personal-Neither...both of you may have pre-written this shit.

Multis-Blueshift....merkage didn't have any.But BLue...next time..don't put "this" or ~this~.Or "//" neither.

Originality-Merkage..though both of you had no creative punches.

Vote-Merkage...for punches....
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Voted For: .Merkage.

BlueShift:

Yo, Im a "Lyrikill~Assassin" coz I'm "ASSASSINATIN~YA~LYRICALLY" after "assessin~ya~lyrics", i'm rippin~ya....LITERALLY!//
^^Ehh ok 4/10
KILLIN~ME? Ya gotta be "KIDDIN~ME" how else ya gonna be "SONNIN~ME?" ***....nuke ya off "DA~PLANET" dat's tha only fuckin way your gonna be "UPPIN V's!" lol//***
^^decent bar ok punch 6/10
I'll "lay~ya~flat" like "FLOOR~BOARD'Z" cause ya crew aint got a "heart~beat" between them...like fuckin "MORGUE~whoreZ!" lol//***
^^ehh this was ok 5/10
I "FLOOR~BOREZ" but a game of "KNUCKLES" is tha only time you could "RAP~HARD"***...RETARD!...I spit so "SICK" I "infect" my own fuckin "Hewlett~Packard!" lol/ DRUG~LORD??....pffft, tha only time this mummy boyZ "on"~"line" is when he's "tappin~away" at his "KEYBOARD!" lol//*** You a "KEY~DORK"***
^^decent 9/20
I'll put'cha head against ya sig for "TARGET~PRACTICE!"*** ....u cant "touch~this" like ya had ya "handZ~amputatin"...."SPASTIK!"
^^ehh 4/10
// L.A gettin "EXCITED" about tha win like "TEEN~HORMONEz" but forget it coz ma verse just left a "ringin in ya head"...like "annoyin~store~phoneZ!" lol//
^^sounds bitten 1/10


Overall: 29/70 (41%)


.Merkage.:

I juss don't get you if battles were "test" i don't know if you'll "pass"...
And ya avy dosent make u cool
Sorry Homie to tell da truth it's make u look more of an "ass"
^^good personal decent opener 7/10
And "Vida" not gonna make ya bars "prettier" if anything you'll ruin this
and you winning this
Is kinda like ya rapperz profile played out and "Ludacris"
^^another decent bar 6/10
"5 bucks" that not enuff to get a clue and thats what you'll need
this kid not fuckin around
No i mean it honestly A "fingernail" in his "cemen" was his "latest seed"
^^good metaphor 6/10
Blue why do u insist to suck I've see ya spits mn neva see crap
fuckin dummy
would put elmers glue on his keyboard so he culd "stick to rap"
^^ok 5/10
But homie take this as advice tha rap rap game anit doing nothing.....
for you that is
So you betta wipe the crayola marks off ya keyboard buttons.
^^ehh 4/10

Overall: 28/50 (56%)


Vote: .Merkage.


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Voted For: BlueShift

^^^ merkage got merked.......blue shift won no doubt had better multis better structure better punches by far....yea yea rtf

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^^^dumbass thats gettin deleted.........and i did'nt get murked.....goofy mahfucka

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Voted For: .Merkage.

Merk gets my vote here,

for starters it was readable, you need to move all the "/~"#*"~" shit and merk get rid of your "'s.

Blues best:

I'll "lay~ya~flat" like "FLOOR~BOARD'Z" cause ya crew aint got a "heart~beat" between them...like fuckin "MORGUE~whoreZ!"

Murks:

Blue why do u insist to suck I've see ya spits mn neva see crap
fuckin dummy
would put elmers glue on his keyboard so he culd "stick to rap"

Had dope wordplay.

NO hate,

RTF in my sig or this gets removed!!

On the real, both have mad potential but ima go wit merk for using harder hitting concepts and more original punches.

Blues' flow was the key thing in his verse but it wasnt all that.