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Problem Child 08-01-05 06:26 PM

Problem Child vs CataclyzM-I-C
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-05 at 06:26 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Problem Child 08-01-05 06:27 PM

[QUOTE=Problem Child]Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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No Recycling
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iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-05 at 06:26 PM

Problem Child 08-01-05 06:28 PM

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-05 at 06:26 PM [/QUOTE]

Problem Child 08-01-05 06:29 PM

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-05 at [anytime[/b][/Q

System 08-01-05 06:29 PM

CataclyzM-i-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-05 06:29 PM.

Problem Child 08-01-05 06:30 PM

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

p.s if u don't spit 1st within 2 dayz its a automatic win fo me iight peace :shoot:

Problem Child 08-01-05 06:33 PM

remeber

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

iight those da rulez u spit 1st

Minimum posts to vote: 20

CataclyzM-i-C 08-01-05 10:13 PM

iiighttttt...

when it comes to gun fire, ill let ammo fly threw ya/
cus i rip problem children, even that white kid junior
ill hit u in the hip with the guage n let ya whole thigh dangle/
do it like the motion picture..son..i'll use ya bow tie to strangle
you got about as many wins as the cincinatti bangels/
lil nigga dont wanna tangle he knos ill leave his body mangled
if u da problem then u can call me A.I./
this kid needs a str8 eye cuz he raps like a fuckin gay guy
u aint the real problem so stop hatin on cass/
the hustler wins this battle so get ur tung out his ass
im from mass, where da hood burns our trash/
u'll ignite asap cuz ur barz is str8 gas
u cud never b me, my barz are 2 fuckin wild/
im sonnin dis child so he mite bite daddys style


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System 08-02-05 10:59 AM

Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 10:59 AM.

Problem Child 08-02-05 04:39 PM

im gonna~MURDA~u ya~COWARD~cuz im wanna those
crazy niggaz that rep~BROWARD~//listen CataclyzM-I-C
u bout 2 get rip see sumthing~SLICK~ill bus yo~shit~//
Dawg u tryin 2 battle me ur really~FUNNY~u look like a fuckin fruity~bunnyz~//cuz im gonna be tha champ so.. u gone~WORSHIP~ME~//cuz i aint a pussy bitch like u
wit da~HIV~//like a boss i got yo mamma~on~LOCK~
try fuck wit me i spray ya wit da~GLOCK~//so im jus
gonna end it~RIGHT~HERE~NOW~so ill see u later in tha~STREETS~U FUCKIN~CLOWN~//

GêÑ触§ 08-02-05 04:52 PM

Voted For: Problem Child

Alright to be striaght up this was one close battle but only one man can win and in my opinion its striaght up Problem Child Now M-I-C had some dope multi's but didn't add up to P{

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CataclyzM-i-C 08-02-05 05:12 PM

^^^ wow !
lol... uppin

%%%% 08-02-05 09:58 PM

Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

flow-ok....problem child had a very newbish structure.Get rid of this ~ shit~.And don't write your verses in a paragraph form.

Punches-Both need some wordlplay and metas...but i'll give it to CataclyzM...cause problem child punches were newbish.

Personals-Neither and I suggest you guys both work on this aspect of battlin as it is important.

Multis-Neither....and once again...I suggest you both work on this.That basic rhyme scheme went outta style looong ago.

Originality- Cataclym ..though his lines weren't nutin special.The other lacked everything.

Vote-CatackyzM-I-C

Defined 08-02-05 10:07 PM

Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

WEAK BATTLE

Punches- m-i-c becuze they were more effective actually made since and ur opponent didnt eally have one good punch he had to much self glory

Flow- m-i-c becuze ur flow was aight but it did fall off every once in a while but ur opponents wassnt god at all urs wasnt consistant at all

personals- niether both didnt come wit any good personals work on dat

complexity-niether u both were pretty basic wit this one

multis- niether both need some work on that

closer- m-i-c urs was aight copared to ur opponents it killed it better flow to it and actually a punch

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Problem Child 08-02-05 10:08 PM

iight uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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