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convicted 08-01-05 07:33 PM

Ceck 1-2#READY.....[ workin on a piece just warmin up]
 
my intections wernt that good,.......so i guess...
i get wat i desurve.........i didnt come from no hood
bitch listen to the words...........
i hurt 2 many loved 1's in tha past
i didnt think of wat should have come first.........
feels like every breath is my last.....am i cursed



life aint easy .......belive me....
tha goverments to god dam greedy......
i speak nothin but tha truth
so if u think im cheesy ........think of it as something new
im a feelin a little weezy........
muthafucka i aint the reason u aint right
its tha shit u do that brings on tha fight......
....i thought ya learned ya leason
but fuck it i'll end your shit tonight.....
heres my dick u can suck it aight........




for every beat i mix .............
is 2 remind u i speak my mind with rips
bend over touch ya toes
an um... move them hips......ya thats right
looks like u rollin with kids
shot gun loaded duck quick...............
im a tar up some shit.....
think i care..... u fuckin wimp
nothins far or free unless u got a gift



CB83

Kawn Flixx 08-01-05 08:26 PM

Drop a link or this will be closed

taz 08-01-05 10:09 PM

not that u care but i didnt particulary like this one man....no hate just stating my opinion...you had no structure to compliment vocab, none to speak of....and multis were not that great.....once again not hating just given feed back, return the favor man 5/10


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