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Siks J vs White Dogg
Battle Rules:
10 lines... House Rules... After yuo accept verse due in 30 mins... ....good luck Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-04-05 at 10:34 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Siks J has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 10:43 AM.
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I have verses ready for suckas in no time,
i shoot punchlines like bullets from columbine, so ya see ya lil creampuff, if i say it i MEAN tough, right now if i seem rough ya might just belive such, My flow so cold i get confused for an ice rink, no matter what you think i dont just write with i abuse ink, What you think you Nate or Snoop with that dogg name, this sickness i spit aint just insults, its called flame, its called gain, the progress from from you to no game, o shame, all thats about you is so plain. |
White Dogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 03:42 PM.
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Kid you're a bigger herb....then the fuckin dolls from Cabbage Patch...
Face it homie...you couldn't 'cum fresh'....if you 'busted is a plastic bag'... When I read your verse...all I get is a laugh...a smile from it... Cause your rhymes and you are alike....you're both piles of shit... You think you're 'bright'? Nah bow to me...put ya 'neon' the cement... Kid when I told you to knock on wood...doesn't mean grab my penis... This kids lower than dirt...not even a steam roller could flatten 'em... I'll hit you with a real punch...then at least ya teeth can go platinum... Imma just say I 'sunned' you... cuz then you'll shine all year round... Honestly kid I would've caught ya drift....that is if it didn't drown! |
uppin...............
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nice drop and good luck mayne
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Voted For: White Dogg
ONE SIDEDDDDDDDDDD.... Vote = WHITE DOGG white started off real strong wit that first punch...but after that he was dyin down wit some corny rhymes...but he picked it up in the end wit dat platinum punch sik really didnt really have any punches AT ALL...his verse was more for open mic...didnt actually BATTLE whitedogg.... punches - dogg wordplay - dogg metaphors - dogg rhyme scheme - dogg Vote - White Dogg would apreciate it if yall would return the favor in the battle in my sig.... 1 |
thanks for the vote i will work on my puches
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Voted For: White Dogg
VOTE IN LINK BELOW(no explamation needed neither) \/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202755 Flow-White Dogg.....Siks 3 just had his words placed badly and shit.Both of you get a new rhyme sheme. Punches-OK...Siks had none so white dogg automatically got this.But white dogg...all your lines were played.come/cum,sunned/sonned...those are basic..the rest were weak. Personals-Neither...generic punches dropped by both cats. Multis-Neither....both of you had basic rhyme sheme.Hence...reason I told you to go get a new scheme. Originality-WHite dogg for actually having punches though it was played as fucked. Vote-White Dogg(vote in link above) |
Voted For: Siks J
Kid you're a bigger herb....then the fuckin dolls from Cabbage Patch... Look, i gotta admit, i sorta liked the opening, simile with personal but yo, first of all, cabbage has nothing to do with "herbs", so you assed out there. Face it homie...you couldn't 'cum fresh'....if you 'busted is a plastic bag'... --what?? When I read your verse...all I get is a laugh...a smile from it... Cause your rhymes and you are alike....you're both piles of shit... You think you're 'bright'? Nah bow to me...put ya 'neon' the cement... Kid when I told you to knock on wood...doesn't mean grab my penis... This kids lower than dirt...not even a steam roller could flatten 'em... I'll hit you with a real punch...then at least ya teeth can go platinum... Imma just say I 'sunned' you... cuz then you'll shine all year round... Honestly kid I would've caught ya drift....that is if it didn't drown! I thought his closing was better than Siks', As far as flow goes, it had none. It is choppy and bumpy. Now onto Siks J: Yo, I understood this a lot better; let me break it down: I have verses ready for suckas in no time, he's clearly responding to the time limit (which isn't easy) i shoot punchlines like bullets from columbine, wow, a deep wound and awesome double meaning: making his simile creative and clear, while also creating a setting of him shooting down Whitedogg. so ya see ya lil creampuff, if i say it i MEAN tough, right now if i seem rough ya might just belive such, sorry, pointless filler, but he makes up for it... My flow so cold i get confused for an ice rink, no matter what you think i dont just write with i abuse ink, a little self glor, but still taking a shot at what "whitedogg" thinks... What you think you Nate or Snoop with that dogg name, this sickness i spit aint just insults, its called flame, I like how he makes a cutting personal at White for trying to mimic other well-known rappers, makes him look like a wannabe, and famous by association its called gain, the progress from from you to no game, o shame, all thats about you is so plain. -ending is a little weak, but he def. gets my vote |
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