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cut vs nice_mike
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-05-05 at 03:51 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
cut has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 03:54 AM.
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cuts a rapverse don... how you gona diss when i was gone/
im "nyce" on the "mike"... ya faggot ass cant afford one//* i spit 'fire' at this crew like my mic 'shoots', own ya leader an ya recruits/ its like battlin on a 'farm'... the way i 'step on these fruits'//** they compare me to 'god' because i crush u faggots from a great height/ come out the closet, its 'dark'... we know u really love "D-Lyte"// (the light)*** you should be called "vince mcmahon" coz all you do is create 'hype'/ you a fake ass 'rappin receptionist' because all you do is 'type'//**** look what u dun started, ya crew stinks as if one of ya members farted/ call me 'fat joe' the way i bring 'terror' to your 'department'//***** * - he was dissin me in introductions when i werent registered... and he says hes ill an shit but aint even got a mic... self explanitary/ ** - self explanitary.. jus punch. *** - if u dont understand the wordplay dont fuckin vote ameture. **** - he claim to be ill an ill at audio but hes a fake coz all he doin is typin some silly ass raps. ***** - fat joes clique = terror squad....rest self explanitary... |
nice_mike has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 03:57 AM.
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cuts a rap-verse don... how you gona diss when i was gone/
im "nyce" on the "mike"... ya faggot ass cant afford one//* i spit 'fire' at this crew like my mic 'shoots', own ya leader an ya recruits/ its like battlin on a 'farm'... the way i 'step on these fruits'//** they compare me to 'god' because i crush u faggots from a great height/ come out the closet, its 'dark'... we know u really love "D-Lyte"// (the light)*** you should be called "vince mcmahon" coz all you do is create 'hype'/ you a fake ass 'rappin receptionist' because all you do is 'type'//**** look what u dun started, ya crew stinks as if one of ya members farted/ call me 'fat joe' the way i bring 'terror' to your 'department'//***** * - he was dissin me in introductions when i werent registered... and he says hes ill an shit but aint even got a mic... self explanitary/ ** - self explanitary.. jus punch. *** - if u dont understand the wordplay dont fuckin vote ameture. **** - he claim to be ill an ill at audio but hes a fake coz all he doin is typin some silly ass raps. ***** - fat joes clique = terror squad....rest self explanitary... Your turn |
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I come flipping-bars, leave him in a fuckin ditch-with-scars... Cuz He can’t “stand up to me” with Lord “on his dick-so-hard!!!”... Bring this bitch-to-harm, attach his wrists-and-arms and knees-to-thorns... This emcee-is-torn, but I “get rid of Cut quickly” applying “Neosporin!!!”... He seemed-to-sworn he’d have me beat, but he comes-to-his-fall... I say, “Fuck a body bag!! Cut will get covered-with-gauze!!!!”... He’s smother-because I spit heat-that-streams through his defeated-team.. Then I’m “taking Cut out” like he was a “deleted-scene!!!”... Nyce treats-him-mean cuz he brought rap-to-perjury... I showed “Cut wouldn’t be big” if he “required plastic surgery!!!”... |
Voted For: cut
ok even though it really sux when u have to explain ur punches Cut came better with punches and everything, flow was mikes but everyone uses that style now, its boring and it never punches so read some battles man....keep writing but V/Cut for punching better |
Voted For: cut
VOTE IN LINK BELOW(no explamations needed either) \/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202755 Flow-Cut...had his rhyming words placed nicely.His shit was easier...rolled of the tongue easier. Punches-Now..cut had good concepts...but the execution was weak.Nice Mik kept talking about how he would do this and do that...but his punches lacked terribly. Personals-Definetly Cut...like I said..Nice kept talking about himself..cut had punches..weak ones...but punches nevertheless. Multis-Nice...but to me...it seemed as though he based his verse around them.To me..that's a no-no...you cannot force multis. Complexity-Cut...need I say anymore?Weak punches are better than no punches. Vote-Cut(vote in link above) |
Voted For: nice_mike
I have to say, both overall good, and good heat coming in. Lemme break it down: cuts a rap-verse don... how you gona diss when i was gone/ im "nyce" on the "mike"... ya faggot ass cant afford one//* ^good personal/ name-play-being gay has nothing to do with what you can afford though i spit 'fire' at this crew like my mic 'shoots', own ya leader an ya recruits/ its like battlin on a 'farm'... the way i 'step on these fruits'//** ^changing the timing and flow is affected. This line was cheesy. Fruits are more on orchards than farms. Animals and veggies are on them, but i like how you're referring to him as a fruit they compare me to 'god' because i crush u faggots from a great height/ ^God doesn't do that to gays come out the closet, its 'dark'... we know u really love "D-Lyte"// (the light)*** ^HAHAHAH you should be called "vince mcmahon" coz all you do is create 'hype'/ ^HAHAHA you a fake ass 'rappin receptionist' because all you do is 'type'//**** ^HAHAHAH look what u dun started, ya crew stinks as if one of ya members farted/ ^HAHAH... but what members? call me 'fat joe' the way i bring 'terror' to your 'department'//***** ^weak ending. leave other rappers out, and be original yo look I come flipping-bars, leave him in a fuckin ditch-with-scars... Cuz He can’t “stand up to me” with Lord “on his dick-so-hard!!!”... Bring this bitch-to-harm, attach his wrists-and-arms and knees-to-thorns... ^great flow, great in between rhyming words. that's hard to do This emcee-is-torn, but I “get rid of Cut quickly” applying “Neosporin!!!”... ^What can i say... awesome line and rhyme He seemed-to-sworn he’d have me beat, but he comes-to-his-fall... I say, “Fuck a body bag!! Cut will get covered-with-gauze!!!!”... ^HAHAHAHHAAH He’s smother-because I spit heat-that-streams through his defeated-team.. Then I’m “taking Cut out” like he was a “deleted-scene!!!”... ^WOW, AMAZING PERSONAL, HIT, AND RHYME Nyce treats-him-mean cuz he brought rap-to-perjury... I showed “Cut wouldn’t be big” if he “required plastic surgery!!!”... ^mAN, great finish... leaving him cut up with personals, good rhyme and flow Peace my vote to Mike |
Voted For: nice_mike
cuts a rap-verse don... how you gona diss when i was gone/ im "nyce" on the "mike"... ya faggot ass cant afford one//* ^^^weak man....but a personal neverthelless...4/10 i spit 'fire' at this crew like my mic 'shoots', own ya leader an ya recruits/ its like battlin on a 'farm'... the way i 'step on these fruits'//** ^^^farm/fruit?....nah....2/10 they compare me to 'god' because i crush u faggots from a great height/ come out the closet, its 'dark'... we know u really love "D-Lyte"// (the light)*** ^^d-Lyte is not the light...more like delight...bad wordplay...1/10 you should be called "vince mcmahon" coz all you do is create 'hype'/ you a fake ass 'rappin receptionist' because all you do is 'type'//**** ^^1st line..wat's wrong wit creating hype?..3/10 look what u dun started, ya crew stinks as if one of ya members farted/ call me 'fat joe' the way i bring 'terror' to your 'department'//***** ^^^Not a punch...1/10 OK...weak verse here.Flow was average.Structure was horrible.Drop the "//" ...that makes ya verse look newbish.You didn't have to explain all that.Punches were bad.That hype one...what's wrong with creating hype?...hype sells...even if an album sucks...if it has hype..it will sell.That line didn't work for me.The rest was meh.Work on having wordplay that works too. I come flipping-bars, leave him in a fuckin ditch-with-scars... Cuz He can’t “stand up to me” with Lord “on his dick-so-hard!!!”... ^^forced multis here...weak punch...2/10 Bring this bitch-to-harm, attach his wrists-and-arms and knees-to-thorns... This emcee-is-torn, but I “get rid of Cut quickly” applying “Neosporin!!!”... ^^multis are better here...punch was dope...7/10 He seemed-to-sworn he’d have me beat, but he comes-to-his-fall... I say, “Fuck a body bag!! Cut will get covered-with-gauze!!!!”... ^^didn't flow well...ite punch...5/10 He’s smother-because I spit heat-that-streams through his defeated-team.. Then I’m “taking Cut out” like he was a “deleted-scene!!!”... ^^enough with this concept...good multis...4/10 Nyce treats-him-mean cuz he brought rap-to-perjury... I showed “Cut wouldn’t be big” if he “required plastic surgery!!!”... ^^Same concept as before man...2/10 OK..verse with ups and downs here.You had some forced multis in there.And you don't really need the hypens to point them out.That's not neccesary.Ur punches were ite.My favorite in that verse was the neosporin one.But then afterwards...all your punches were based on the same concept.Have a variety next time. Vote-Nice Mike RTF BELOW!! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204095 |
Voted For: nice_mike
Mike won this shit hands down.......... |
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