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Kid Chaos 08-04-05 12:00 AM

an experiment...
 
even if i die ima be a fuckin problem so dont cry just wait for me to tell you why...//
wHeN tHe TyMe cOmEz......... my capibilities will be avalible for your viewing purpose//
ItS rEaLly bEeN fUn....... but the tyme to play is gone no more anxiety im back in focus, the full ability of chaos will send you all to comin straight under
my service//
i wont run "OuT~oF~bReAtHe".........in fact, this might be yo death plus "yOuR~lAsT~bReaThE", the next step you might regret and that would be a "sAfe~bet"//
and to those niggas who jus tryin to get a rep, the next life you live i might let you have have it son but "nOt~yEt" //
tRy To sUrVive......... when the choppa visits cus it wants to meet ya//
I hOpE sHe WoNt MiNd........ when i take you from yo senorita//
sOmE sAy i'M kRaZiI......... but they have no idea of the things that enrage me//
oNe CaLlS mE bAbY....... but not even that one has the power or influence to try and save me//
WhEn ThE dAy aRrIvEs.....that i justify my "FaLsE~sTarT", ill be alive and it wont be denied thar my lyrics "aRe~hOtT"//
i'M rEbOrN.......or rather reawakened in the sense of all my sins been renpented//
sO nOw YoU'lL LeArN.......that while im very hated it still means that ill be remembered, its my turn to live my dream so my flow is now being unleashed....it wont stop until the day that you are deceased//
ill let you die as you "rEsT~iN~pEaCe" when you fall at the "oThEr~EnD~oF~mY~pIeCe//
the police swarmin as they see me fleeing from the "mUrDer~sCeNe"//
niggas aroun me walkin away whispering "hE'z~A~fIeNd", but its a damn shame cus im da only one of those fools with even a little bit a "dIs~A~pLiNe//
im sick and tired of runnin from da fuckin cOpS, im now retired because im finally on the last of my "NiNe~LiVeS"//
my soul has been UnLoCkEd, and tho its being devoured god has finally answered "My~cRiEs"//

Kawn Flixx 08-04-05 01:52 AM

Drop a link or this will be closed

taz 08-04-05 05:18 PM

structure made the flow hard to follow, u needa up in that iight........vocab was there some spots and not there some.....u had hella good multis man...good shit.....rhyme scheme was iight...not bad...6/10 keep elevatin iight....rtf if u would


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