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Pressence vs Black Queen
Battle Rules:
6 - 12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO Not closed by Augest 29 person with the most vote wins Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 08-05-05 at 02:43 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
Pressence has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 02:44 PM.
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Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 02:44 PM.
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dying for some sex,like your whole life is comprised of some ghost-kisses
cause all she be does is cum-plane bout it,like some horny air hostesses disrespected,cause ya Open Mics SUCK!,they all either,strayed-or-neglected She got Game in her sig,just goes to show she gets played-and-rejected trying ya sell your soul,but nobody wanted to buy it,and u in a hot-drought your rhymes are bout as this-hired(desired)as poor college drop-outs all over you plan on bitchin and bitchin,like it's your sole niche-and-it's-zigs I'll slap you and have you covering half ya face like the bitch-in-ya-sig. she thinks I'm macreep based on Ip's,so now she feel special like a scholar cause she lackes sense(cents) like some rich people obsessed with dollars buring herself up in a garden after swallowin seeds,is how she'd grow cause her skill will never tie(thigh),with mines,like some legless hoes |
Im in the damn Presence to just simply put you on the spot
By telling ya secret that you Macreep/Ktrini dont say you not * Cause i'm a Soldier... and i get glad-with- haters(Gladiators) bars They're just die knowin what's coming, like aliens from mars Of course, you just want to battle me to get the hype again And you dig up all your rhymes from otha sites like its a reyclin bin And this guy said IPs mean shit cus i said him n Macreep IPs the same This nerd got sprayed so much thats why he needed a new name This herb finna get served fast so you be needing some help So everybody should “Down grade your status to thug less!” Nobody’s going to like you so please jus don’t even try dude So why should I try fool, when you diss yourself more than I do *click the link macreep n presense ips the same ill rtf jus vote in the battle ''honestly'' |
damn yo.....post ya verse already....no wonder you wanted so much time....
it's only 6 lines.... |
ooh.......................fake personals.......whackness at it's finest....congradulations black queen
*every applauds* |
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Voted For: Pressence
i think pressence took this the amount of punches he threw at you jus killed you good concepts which pressence developed into puches good wordplay good flow lol good everything liked this battle very good black queen-you should have done more personals and your punches didnt seem to hit like pressence's did ya know?well i liked ya flow and ya structure press- you took this with all out punches and personals |
^^^lol i had a lot of personals didnt read the verse through but w/e 1-0
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Voted For: Pressence
Black Queen Im in the damn Presence to just simply put you on the spot By telling ya secret that you Macreep/Ktrini dont say you not * ^^ an ok personal..worded poorly Cause i'm a Soldier... and i get glad-with- haters(Gladiators) bars They're just die knowin what's coming, like aliens from mars ^^ennh not exactly a punch..worded bad Of course, you just want to battle me to get the hype again And you dig up all your rhymes from otha sites like its a reyclin bin ^^lol pretty good but not really flowin that good And this guy said IPs mean shit cus i said him n Macreep IPs the same This nerd got sprayed so much thats why he needed a new name ^^umm dont flow well This herb finna get served fast so you be needing some help So everybody should “Down grade your status to thug less!” ^^no rhyme scheme, really bad Nobody’s going to like you so please jus don’t even try dude So why should I try fool, when you diss yourself more than I do ^^lol, pretty nice overall: 6.5/10.. pretty good verse, u coulda used multies more though. Also u have to diss him more dont just use the IP thing cuz it gets boring. Also work on ur wording cuz it seems to long when read. Good verse. vs. Pressence dying for some sex,like your whole life is comprised of some ghost-kisses cause all she be does is cum-plane bout it,like some horny air hostesses ^^ lmao nice man disrespected,cause ya Open Mics SUCK!,they all either,strayed-or-neglected She got Game in her sig,just goes to show she gets played-and-rejected ^^good flow good punch lol trying ta sell your soul,but nobody wanted to buy it,and u in a hot-drought your rhymes are bout as this-hired(desired)as poor college drop-outs ^^wordplay was forced, ok punch all over you plan on bitchin and bitchin,like it's your sole niche-and-it's-zigs I'll slap you and have you covering half ya face like the bitch-in-ya-sig. ^^lmao nice cuz that her in the sig she thinks I'm macreep based on Ip's,so now she feel special like a scholar cause she lackes sense(cents) like some rich people obsessed with dollars ^^dont make sense really... buring herself up in a garden after swallowin seeds,is how she'd grow cause her skill will never tie(thigh),with mines,like some legless hoes ^^umm ok wordplay forced again overall:7.5/10... u had some forced wordplay but u made up for it in most of ur punches. u had great flow and I liked ur inner multies. Really the only bad thing is wording and wordplay, both of u seem to have that problem. Great Verse man. V/Pressence for better punches and flow, I recommend u both keeo writing lol, and that u guys work on ur wording and wordplay, cuz P some of ur stuff was forced which is really bad.... Please vote on my battles in my sig..thanks-PEACE |
^^^^Good vote.....will keep feedback in mind.....ooh...and i'll return favor.....
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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
Checking this out...Even though there's arent any naked pictures...:(
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^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^:nono:
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c'mon.........one more vote by 2night someone!!!!!.
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