Lost in the Smoke
 

This track is about a month or two old but this is my latest track. I been busy with movin out an new jobs n shit.

But Im new to the site an should give yall a taste of what Im about, my steeeez.

www.purevolume.com/sinsere

Its featuring this kid I know from around the way, hes a poet, this is the second song hes ever done so he aint the greatest but still songs aight. This song was a school project for him.

He spits first, then I spit second then he has a few bars right at the end again.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2344751

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2344754

listening as i type....



beat is ill, nice choice...


ight first dude dat u? flow is real good, lyrics are kool voice sounds a bit australian in some places quality is dope emotion is pretty good, second dude now,... flow is pretty good, l;yrics are nice, quakity is good. emotion could be better but its ight. anuther verse.. thsi aint as good as the first, still decent though flow aint as consistant idont think. but overall decent track man keep droppin em pz

yo this was nice 1................


first guy.....nice flow,nice lyrics,structure gd......
second guy....yea same maybe even better lyrics and flow.....
structure of whole song was gd.......nice beat choice......
nice drop.....kee this up man............

Good looks on the feed, Im the second on this track. An if theres any accent, its canadian, west coast but still.

blah im english aint godo wit american accents n fings like that my bad lol

beat is familiar for some reason

again...welcome to the board homie


1st cat...vocals a tad muted sounding...but flow was pretty decent...

boy...don't ya jus love built in samples

chea


2nd cat...vocals had too much of an "echo" effect on them...

ur voice/flow are both fine

i liked ya rhyming


solid collab

and yea...i'm always down for a collab


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