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noname 08-05-05 03:10 PM

Natural killa vs kamze
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-05-05 at 03:40 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

System 08-05-05 03:14 PM

Kamze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 03:14 PM.

System 08-05-05 03:22 PM

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 03:22 PM.

noname 08-05-05 03:34 PM

he got GAME in his avatar,and GAme in his signature,what the fuck?
does helook like a ferris wheel to u?,ridin up and down on his schumck
im the grease on the ladder,meaning you gonna stay on the bottom
Kamze's punches all missed(mist) like windsheilds in autumn
wanna call-out newbies only to show off,like a bold ladies strut
your rhymes all fade out of our minds like an old 80's haircut
Kamze?,wtf is that shit?to you,the alphabet and ya name's the same
cause you urself don't know wat it's sopposed to be sayin

Kamze 08-05-05 04:07 PM

Your rhymes and your punches,are a joke, they're as 'Killa' as your name,
If you start gettin upset, then guess what, you only got yourself to blame,
All of a sudden, you think you a 'vet',cuz u think you gonna got a few wins over people,
But the only chance you stand of being a 'vet', is if you started 'treatin animals',
You have no experience or skill, so there's no way you'll get a win over me,
Cuz you're like a 'man in a wheelchair',cuz,..........you're both at a 'disability',
My rhymes hit you right in the spot, cuz you can't reach my level, you just not able,
& don't let my lyrics decide your 'fate', cuz the verdict could be.........'fatal'.

Kamze 08-05-05 04:10 PM

Ay yo, we uppin for votes.C'mon vote and we'll RTF!!!!!!!

Kamze 08-05-05 04:36 PM

We uppin for votes. c'mon we'll RTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nirt 08-05-05 04:41 PM

This was feedback posted for Kamze
 
Feelin lazy and tired since I been writing verses all day...but..

All of a sudden, you think you a 'vet',cuz u think you gonna got a few wins over people,
But the only chance you stand of being a 'vet', is if you started 'treatin animals',
^^This line will mess you up.

FIrst...he just got here...so how he got a few wins?And it didn't rhyme.

Ur verse didn't have any personals BTW...so it was probably pre-written

As for the other guy...I ain't read it...

noname 08-05-05 05:47 PM

uppin.............................................

noname 08-05-05 07:33 PM

c'mon.....stop sleeping on this...................

noname 08-05-05 11:09 PM

uppin............................................. .

noname 08-06-05 12:50 AM

uppin.............................................

Mike McGuire 08-06-05 05:13 AM

Voted For: Natural killa

uhh this battle was kinda weak...But it was alrite...here is what i think

KAMZE
Your rhymes and your punches,are a joke, they're as 'Killa' as your name,
If you start gettin upset, then guess what, you only got yourself to blame,
...didnt like the openin...wasnt strong
(2/10)
All of a sudden, you think you a 'vet',cuz u think you gonna got a few wins over people,
But the only chance you stand of being a 'vet', is if you started 'treatin animals',
I felt that one...it was pretty good but didnt even rhyme tho...
(4/10)
You have no experience or skill, so there's no way you'll get a win over me,
Cuz you're like a 'man in a wheelchair',cuz,..........you're both at a 'disability'
aiiite....likd it sort of(5/10)
My rhymes hit you right in the spot, cuz you can't reach my level, you just not able,
& don't let my lyrics decide your 'fate', cuz the verdict could be.........'fatal'.
ok....(3/10)
14/40 = 35%


Natural Killa



he got GAME in his avatar,and GAme in his signature,what the fuck?
does helook like a ferris wheel to u?,ridin up and down on his schumck
wasnt feelin it.......(3/10)

im the grease on the ladder,meaning you gonna stay on the bottom
Kamze's punches all missed(mist) like windsheilds in autumn
i liked this one lol.....(6/10)
wanna call-out newbies only to show off,like a bold ladies strut
your rhymes all fade out of our minds like an old 80's haircut
aiiite.....kinda outplayed a lil (4/10)
Kamze?,wtf is that shit?to you,the alphabet and ya name's the same
cause you urself don't know wat it's sopposed to be sayin
ummm....what the hell?? (2/10)

15/40 = 38%

My vote goes to Natural Killa....Close battle but a weak 1

noname 08-06-05 12:35 PM

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Daubs 08-06-05 02:35 PM

This was feedback posted for Kamze
 
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