.Merkage. vs The Revelation
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines...
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-05-05 at 11:16 PM

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The Revelation has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 10:48 PM.

.Merkage. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 10:52 PM.

I would son u.....but tha only way you "chip off tha block" is if u were "discarded Lays"
But i did him a favor
........and "pissed" on his old calender so he could "remember tha Golden Dayz"
Damn All The Da same Im not used to calling peeps lames
But....He stuck his dick in a Xbox so....he could be a "head in da game"
....Im afraid this battle is over homie I was beyond killing you
.If someone touched is tits back is da only time the "feeling you"

^^check his sig


if you don't understand don't vote...

typo's but meh uppin for votes...........

I didn't know they gave out trophies for worst player in the game,
You must get a lotta time, cuz the only thing more played is your wordplay.
Call the man white chocolate cuz he's confused within himself,
Only time he 'dropped a gat', was when his toy fell off of the shelf.
Today is a bad day, cuz your punches are gonna blow me away?
HA! Only way you could touch me is if I just had nothing to s....

1st Bar: Punch on his picture with his trophies.
2nd Bar: Dirty harry is white, he's black. Did a "gangster" pose.
3rd Bar: Making fun of Chicago, windy city, blow. I'm basically saying he isn't worth it to even finish. I had nothing to say to him, and still could beat him.

Voted For: The Revelation

I didn't know they gave out trophies for worst player in the game,
You must get a lotta time, cuz the only thing more played is your wordplay.
^^^bah....basic....2/10
Call the man white chocolate cuz he's confused within himself,
Only time he 'dropped a gat', was when his toy fell off of the shelf.
^^OK....kinda amutuer wordplay...5/10
Today is a bad day, cuz your punches are gonna blow me away?
HA! Only way you could touch me is if I just had nothing to s....
^^????.......2/10

2 bars just didn't connect well.Basic rhyme scheme which is a definite no.You had wordplay in the 2nd bar which was amueter.THe last bar was probably your worst one.A pretty weak verse.

I would son u.....but tha only way you "chip off tha block" is if u were "discarded Lays"
But i did him a favor
........and "pissed" on his old calender so he could "remember tha Golden Dayz"
^^What the fuck?????........1/10
Damn All The Da same Im not used to calling peeps lames
But....He stuck his dick in a Xbox so....he could be a "head in da game"
^^head lines are played as fuck...1/10
....Im afraid this battle is over homie I was beyond killing you
.If someone touched is tits back is da only time the "feeling you
^^^meh......4/10

2 bars that sucked.But at least every bar had a punch...that the only positive thing I see for you.1st bar was just flat out stupuid.2nd was played as fuck.3rd was meh....close battle...though neither was good.

Vote-Revelation
RTF below
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203195

Voted For: The Revelation


The Rev
Aiight Lols You had Some Aiight Lines Here Some Didn't Rhyme Like The First And Last Bar Play And Game Don't Rhyme Lols Away And S Don't Rhyme Either Man, Try And Get Some Rhyme Scheme In Here Punches Nice Man Wordplay Was Cool Here Call The Man White Choclate Cause He's Confused With Himself Lmao! Good line Mane

Merkage
Meh Kind Of Good Here Structure Was Ass Though Man I THink Your Best Line WasBut i did him a favor
........and "pissed" on his old calender so he could "remember tha Golden Dayz" Funny As Hell Punches Was Cool Wordplay Nice Man Vocabulary Was Shitting Though Try And Work On That Man

No Hate
Vote-Rev

no prop wicked............but i said If u did;nt understand don't vote....and Naturl Killer u obiviously did'nt understand.......the first bar....if u look at his user title u'd get that punch...

Voted For: The Revelation

um...rev WTF....i have difinetely seen/read better

Guess no one got what I was using as a personal. But blah. 2 more votes please.

i meant to press feedback my bad for the vote yall....

Voted For: The Revelation

Call the man white chocolate cuz he's confused within himself,
Only time he 'dropped a gat', was when his toy fell off of the shelf.


Vs

Nothing


The Rev, ur verse was blah.. punches were there.. except
they weren’t as hard hittin though. Only one punch in there
was good, could’ve made them harder.. but w/e, overall
u had a decent verse

Merk, ur verse was blah too.. the flow lacked here.. the
punches weren’t really connectin in this battle here.. but
overall work on ur punches & add some betta personas
up in ur verses too..

^^you always go around droppin bullshit votes?.....you did that in my battle too.