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*NEW SKEL TRACK-"Diss to Khanverse"
heres my verse for this battle i had today, click the link, its the top song called "Diss to Khanverse":
http://www.soundclick.com/artist/3/skel_music.htm FEEDBACK LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2347086 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2347084 |
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LOL, son...this shit was fuckin hillarious. Lots of witty lines in there man. There's osme points I thought your deliv was pretty plane jane but it always flipped up at the midpoint in the line to finish strong at the end. I'm impressed man, and coming form me that's saying a lot. Your voice reminds me a lot of Nature and at times you sound a little bit like my boy Ox |
listening as i type.
ight beat is kool... enmotion is kool but your deliver does seem a bit plane. lol you got some real nice punches in here, flow is on point solid diss mate. looking forward to seeing soem more shit from you coz i like your tracks :D pz |
intro is OK....
your delevery was kinda weak but it worked for you bro... this shit was mad dope lyrical;ly tho..some lines where hella garbage but some where hella witty bro..nice shit witht he lrics and punches......had me laughen at that strech mark line.....nice shit...you also rhymed soem words in your bars that went nice.... |
Ye is a cool beat.U got a real nice flow with some real funny ass lines but alot of them were just to plane!!!!
But keep it up dawg!!!!:D |
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