A-Sez vs Law_Jr
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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Check in by: 08-09-05 at 06:18 PM

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Law_Jr has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-05 06:19 PM.

This kid doesen't kno who tha fuck he's battlin/\Newsflash dawg your not an emcee your style is generic
Shoot off Wit only one clip and already his head's rattlin/\Have this nigga vommitin because i flow toxic

This niggaz on kool kol-b's dick he needz 2 be eraticated/\Dude givin out dumb-ass votes he's fuckin eerie
Kool kol-b in Member Mugshots wasn't the first time he masturebated/\Cuz like faggots at at a bitch party he always says Fuck Puss-c

When this cat thinks of kool kol-b he gets a bizzy-bone-r/\Cant even compare his shit to bone thugz n harmony
U can tell he's always at home jackin off he's a fuckin loner/\Ha fah this guy battlin me is intolerable cruelty

A-Sez has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-05 11:57 PM.

this kid bends over fo tha fellas n he takes it raw
i dont need 2 commit a crime, but ima break tha law
i dont even gotta use good rymes, cuz ur shit is wack as hell

yeah, it means i just put this pussy 2 sleep myself*
c wut im sayin? my lyrics kill u, ur about 2 die
ima school this kid. battle me? wut is Jr.? high?**

* vets = vetranarian, pussy = cat, ahh, u know wut the fuck i mean
** SCHOOL this kid, Jr.? high? = Junior High

uppin............................................. .......

Voted For: A-Sez

This kid doesen't kno who tha fuck he's battlin/\Newsflash dawg your not an emcee your style is generic
Shoot off Wit only one clip and already his head's rattlin/\Have this nigga vommitin because i flow toxic
^^Umm..I assume this is a bar?...but there's no punch
This niggaz on kool kol-b's dick he needz 2 be eraticated/\Dude givin out dumb-ass votes he's fuckin eerie
Kool kol-b in Member Mugshots wasn't the first time he masturebated/\Cuz like faggots at at a bitch party he always says Fuck Puss-c
^^well...you had a good concept on Kool-B...but where was proof...or is it a fake personal on him d/r'n.?
When this cat thinks of kool kol-b he gets a bizzy-bone-r/\Cant even compare his shit to bone thugz n harmony
U can tell he's always at home jackin off he's a fuckin loner/\Ha fah this guy battlin me is intolerable cruelty
^^your just all over the place....

OK...your structure sucks.Just being honest....here.What I think you need is to write you verses normally.not with the ^ shit.And you just seemed to be all over the place.A half of a line spoke about him and Kool-col..and then the other half was about voting...word your shit up and fix structure.



this kid bends over fo tha fellas n he takes it raw
i dont need 2 commit a crime, but ima break tha law
^^played..every battle with Law has to have something like this?
i dont even gotta use good rymes, cuz ur shit is wack as hell
Quote:
Originally Posted by Law_Jr
damn yall niggaz know what no vets means
yeah, it means i just put this pussy 2 sleep myself*
^^No punch.....
c wut im sayin? my lyrics kill u, ur about 2 die
ima school this kid. battle me? wut is Jr.? high?**
^^OK..best line in this bar

Ok...you had a better structure and flow.And wasn't all over the place like LAw.But your punches were weak.1st bar about breakin law has been used against law jr in every single battle he's been in.2nd bar was nothing.3rd was the best.

Vote-A-SEZ
RTF BELOW PLEASE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203195

my bad forgot to quote proof

battle kool col-b vs puss-c this was a vote for kool




from what are you listening to thread

my bad forgot to quote proof

battle kool col-b vs puss-c this was a vote for kool




from what are you listening to thread


please revise vote........

^^that was feed back not a vote

^^that was feed back not a vote

Law....it's too late now to post proof...the voters wouldn't be able to see it.....

Voted For: Law_Jr

V/law_Jr

LAW had better disses better multis better vocab man a-sez just cuz in ur mind u think u good dont mean u only gutta put 3 whack lines no hate just stating my opinion law ur shit was fresh nothing played.....a-sez ur shit was shit nothing at all man no hate.........RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DISQUALIFIED

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uppin............................................. .................................................. ..

Voted For: A-Sez

wow this was hella one sided fam..Sez...good drp man yo shit was hot...last line that shit had me rolling...


Law homnie work on ya structure fam it's fucked horribly.....i did'nt even finish tha verse becuz i culd'nt....

but anywho my vote goes to A-Sez


rtf in my sig or i will get this vote removed fam..i mean it

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