This one cats was abused strongly and used wrongly
 

This one cats was abused strongly and used wrongly
To gather drugs while wearing leathers as a thug homey
Was hurt made mistakes with blunder not great to be
Under pressure, thrill with rhyme just to kill time it free
His nerves just to twist words in the form of rhyme
Truth is renowned but he goofed around with nickel and dime
Stuff, like standing in parade rest he made a mess of marching
And stress squashing his pride time to test while people watching
Him waste time and not lace rhymes with reality they booed
At the taste of lime bitter hit their ears, the dude stayed rude
With verse he devastate foe and regulate flow like an accelerator
So he feast and then increase the fuel to dual as a well creator
Of verse, in the hummer with aggression for school attend
Summer sessions just to get a dandy girl with candy curls in
Her hair

it was aight
good but not good
it was str8

S.P thanks for th epeeps and the props

I could understand this one, pretty much. :thumbup:

Not a real original storyline and some of it seemed forced. You're improving, but your ego is still the same, I guess.

start understanding the realness up in here

is this all you do, is OM's all day?..
..just wondering

commit blunders but quit and wonders where I went wrong, spent long hours studying my mistakes then twist great verse solid like hydraulics no frolics involved

this was an iight piece...sick multis as usual good structure, made it flow nice...still kinda short though......up on vocab.....make it enhance as ur piece goes along.....im diggin this one homey

Rtf on my sig links.......cool runnings

all right thanks fo rthe props on this one for real yall