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L. Veracity 08-07-05 04:21 PM

You Ain't See Me (with Mike Morris)
 
L. VERACITY MUSIC

kinda clubbish track me and my homie did together this week, hoLLa with thoughts...

v-1 Mike Morris
v-2 L. Veracity



REPLY 1
REPLY 2

Tha Q. 08-07-05 09:10 PM

flow is lackluster for the guy part


not bad...just stock...nothing stands out


good mixing tho


beat is ok...kinda choppy


and that hook is BOOTY...ugh


LV...nice crisp vocals...maybe a tad loud...but I cud hear em


not bad tho


up ur lyrics...


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Bliss 08-07-05 09:16 PM

hmm....damn ahahha all i gotta say tha chick spit way betta ahahhahahaha damn but whateva keep it up its not a great collab the reason why.....its not balenced at all....she sounded better....the chorus was....hmm....no? ahah...ummm thaz bout it

upz to the chicky

MyNamesGrafhYall 08-08-05 07:17 AM

yo vera i lyke dis, its a banga, da guy on da track didnt stand out, his vocals and lyrikal content waznt all dat great but ur verse wuz str8, definately da highlight of da trak, not bad tho jus tell ur guy 2 up his lyrikal content other then dat it would of been a solid track 6/10

Artik Phrost 08-08-05 12:19 PM

Listening.....

Yep, Club Song...
Hook:....nah...i dont lyke his dubs....but, yu at the end was kew...i was feelin it...

Mike:...his flow was good...delivery onpoint...lyric wise?..commercial...but i guess it was kew for a club banger...
You:...pretty str8...Yu sound like yu'd beat a how on the block.....lol...i heard a lil wordplay in there...thats coo..ya flow was good.

Sound Quality?...yu sound crisper....ya'll need a better mixer....

overall, the was pretty kew...i can hear it on the radio....nyce job ma

L. Veracity 08-08-05 07:58 PM

a better miXer?...you craZy gurl, I use a 20$ mic from BestBuy, LMAO...

thanx 4 the erplies thus far people...

keep 'em coming like the aftermath of good sex ;)...

Speats 08-10-05 12:38 PM

i like this seriously, first guy was pretty cool, the beat reminds one of eminem
Chorus is wack no hate but fucking annoying, second verse is dope as fuck, you remind me of Eve:) dope i cant wait to do a crew collab with you gurl

Speats 08-10-05 02:21 PM

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...495#post2357495

JRoy 08-10-05 02:54 PM

i like the beat but the first one up aint too great..he avg.....the hook is not mixed right.......alright gettin to the hot part L. you dropped a bomb on this...ya quality is good..but it could be mixed better to the beat....it seems like it might be too loud..but overall you dropped reall nice.good drop ma

overall-7.5/10

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