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RaDiKaL vs Kordozar
Battle Rules:
~Rules~ 1.8-12 unlimited lines.... 2.No Crew or D/R votes... 3.No Recycling.... 4.No Biting.... 5.You spit first.... !!..Lets Go..!! Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 08-08-05 at 12:24 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. Expired battle close - win |
Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-05 11:56 PM.
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RaDiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-05 11:59 PM.
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Coming To The Table With Nothin......And You'll Leave Empty Handed
Not Even A Rapper,Endorsed With M.ens C.ock Is The Only Mc Managed I Seen Ya Latest Posts, All The Call-Outs Left You Frozen Solid Cause You Been A Middle Wieght Longer Then.........Doug Dewitts Still Can't Throw A Punch.....Being Dope Thats False Accusations Ugly Verse,No Wonder You Only Recieve Haunted House Applications No Discussion Your Verse Is Played......... No Need To Fix It Kid's Better Of Leaveing RV Since Most Of Radikals Dis-Missed Personals!!!!!!!!!!!! |
You rappers ~need ta truly know~ RaDiKaL and how ~unbelievable he flow~//
while ~CeReBraL rudely shows~ how he 'WRECK KORD' and wont even ~'need a studio'~// Yo fame is as small as ~1 syllable~ Ima ~come real wit you~ no ~ones feelin you~// so if da ~son willlin to~, my lines'll 'CUT KORD' like 'FATHERS DO TO UMBILICALS'// When dat weapon ~pop out~ you like a 'POLICEMAN LEAVIN' you ~'COP OUT'~// so I'll easily take ya ~block out~ and my rhymes make 'K "OH" like a ~'KNOCKOUT'~// If u dont get help ~for those bars~ you'll get 'SMOKED' like ~'DIGOURNOS ARE'~// leave u 'open 4 ways' like ~'4 door cars'~ ta show ya 'hard days are over' like '70 yr. ~porno stars'~// U're da ~fake of fakes~ I seen alotta wack MCs but like 'birthday cakes' u ~take da cake'~// you was just ~mistaked for great~ so like 'CLUMSY DESTINY HOLDERS' I'll ~'BREAK YA FATE'~// I may not be a ~grown boy,kid~ but my rhymes never fail ta ~own whores,kid~// so while you ~condone wars,kid~ I'll leave 'KORD TANGLED' like ~'PHONE CORDS IS'~// If you dont get a punch,AIM me...DaBAttLeKinG101....and dats how I rap...so hate it or love it.... so watch as I 'CUT KORD' like dis nigga was ~'UMBILICAL'~ |
^^^And dat birthday cakes line....I meant ta say....
so like 'birthday thieves' you 'take da cake'.....I messed up....cant change it tho... So votes folks... |
Voted For: RaDiKaL
Structure-Kordozer, had better flow, liked how it went.....Radikal i dont like how u structured ur flow no hate though Vocab-Radikal, both had weak vocab but rereading each verse i saw a couple good vocab. both up on that Personals-Radikal.....hard hitting too nice job man, Kordozer u needa up on that...didnt feel ur verse was hard... Punches-Radikal, felt he had hard hitting punches that landed good.....Kordozer had some good ones too but didnt match up to radikal. Originality-Felt like radikal had more fresh, and was puttin his skill out for show......Kordozer had orginality too....felt it so tie V/radikal RETURN THE FAVOR OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DISQUALIFIED Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Lol Faggit You Succ Shouldn't Even Be Able To Vote.........
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
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Voted For: Kordozar
You rappers ~need ta truly know~ RaDiKaL and how ~unbelievable he flow~// while ~CeReBraL rudely shows~ how he 'WRECK KORD' and wont even ~'need a studio'~// okay wordplay. but really..whats up with this style? Yo fame is as small as ~1 syllable~ Ima ~come real wit you~ no ~ones feelin you~// so if da ~son willlin to~, my lines'll 'CUT KORD' like 'FATHERS DO TO UMBILICALS'// still..the style ruins your okay wordplay that doesnt hit as a punch When dat weapon ~pop out~ you like a 'POLICEMAN LEAVIN' you ~'COP OUT'~// so I'll easily take ya ~block out~ and my rhymes make 'K "OH" like a ~'KNOCKOUT'~// wow..thats a punch, you make him say oh? really? If u dont get help ~for those bars~ you'll get 'SMOKED' like ~'DIGOURNOS ARE'~// leave u 'open 4 ways' like ~'4 door cars'~ ta show ya 'hard days are over' like '70 yr. ~porno stars'~// omfg shut up U're da ~fake of fakes~ I seen alotta wack MCs but like 'birthday cakes' u ~take da cake'~// you was just ~mistaked for great~ so like 'CLUMSY DESTINY HOLDERS' I'll ~'BREAK YA FATE'~// your meta's are straight herbin yo I may not be a ~grown boy,kid~ but my rhymes never fail ta ~own whores,kid~// so while you ~condone wars,kid~ I'll leave 'KORD TANGLED' like ~'PHONE CORDS IS'~// finally. the pain is over Rad - the only pain you brought was to the reader. This shit defined a newbie. Your structure is fucking horrendous. I wan to throw out my computer after that shit. ~dont write~ LIKE "ThiS!" Cause you suck ass if you do. Your metas were horrible and very basic. Flow was stretched. Nothing good from this verse. Elevate fast. Coming To The Table With Nothin......And You'll Leave Empty Handed Not Even A Rapper,Endorsed With M.ens C.ock Is The Only Mc Managed a gay punch. only effective if clever, and this wasnt I Seen Ya Latest Posts, All The Call-Outs Left You Frozen Solid Cause You Been A Middle Wieght Longer Then.........Doug Dewitts ok ok Still Can't Throw A Punch.....Being Dope Thats False Accusations Ugly Verse,No Wonder You Only Recieve Haunted House Applications meh, okay No Discussion Your Verse Is Played......... No Need To Fix It Kid's Better Of Leaveing RV Since Most Of Radikals Dis-Missed played wordplay. but u worded it wells o it hit. goodjob! Kor - you came weak here. But you didnt need to come hard. A big mismatch in every category. It was a landslde. Your flow was good. Punches were ok but WAY better than his. So goodjob, you beat him with ease. Hit this slept on battle up with a honest, explained vote! Thanks! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198200 |
Voted For: RaDiKaL
First of your Structure is Fucked, and the way you write your Raps are kinda fucked.. But anyway, you had better Punches then your Opponent, And Believe it Or not, it Flowed Aight.. I also liked the wordplay.... No hate.. Mr.Kord You had aight Flow, and Your Sturuture was good, But The PUnches and the personals you laid out were not that effective.. Return a HONEST vote on a Battle in my Sig.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Thanks for da votes...L.I,I'll battle you wit da same structure,same everything and crush you....my shit is way better than any one of yo battles....text aint supposed ta have dat much flow...you dont even know da beat I was rhymin too so hop off....or I'll put another loss on ya record...
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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