Detrimental vs Natural killa
 

Battle Rules:
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-09-05 at 01:22 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

how many lines?......unlimited?......................

fuck i accidentally deleted it.....make it 12-16 lines man lol......

ooh......ok.......I'ma drop tommorow at like 4:00 Pm.......peace.....I'm goi to bed..

hold up talkin to this girl tryin to confort her i'll drop in an hour

Detrimental has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 02:54 AM.

Natural Killa look like he just learnin to rap 1.
Says he's here to kill when he's never heard of a gat 2.
Your life is this website man you ugly as a sin
You're probably mad cuz nothin blows you but the wind
He's fake he just claims the cliq he's hangin with 3.
Trigga Town? ya'll aint down with the bangin shit 4.
You're a hatin bitch and you wonder why we hatin you
Have to tie food to your neck so dogs play with you
We can safely assume you probably think you're fresher
But takin my lyrics is the only way you'll sell a record
You must be stupid, beating me will always be a wish
So from that your IQ must be as small as your g/f's tits
This battle is a prime example of how far your wishin gets
Messin with me leaves your record like the system guest's 5.
Pathetic, you'll probably dick ride if worse comes to worse
This a mans game, next time you step take off your skirt


1.he's a newb
2.his title thing says Coming To Kill You All
3.I'm callin him fake sayin he just claims a cliq if he hangs with them
4.Trigga Town must be his cliq and it makes it seem like they down with guns when most people talk fake about that shit
5.System Guest has a 0-1 record and NK has a 0-0 but i'll change that lol

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 10:47 AM.

i'll give him some scars and a note,while this bitch tries to be hard with a pose
and his name's death-try-mental(name),cause he's like a retard with a rope
so I be at your crib,perspiring you mother,while you at school,firing some butter
n your rhymes are maid as F-rest(fresh),as some aspiring butlers
count on me to deliver the bomb apropos,n watch it blow,soon as ya mom looks down below
n i'm bein real when i say....what real emcee comes from "Akron,Ohio?"
battle a kid whose comments repatee's nerd?,and his career is conferee'd cursed?
and he ain't creative,nah,this bitch named himself after an SAT word
a brat behind guys,might as well hold up the sign,admit,you deliver the fries
you re-hearse(rehearse) that verse more times than a cat with 9 lives
PMS'n crazily,flippin on people,in a legit paging,and no doubt,you in a pre-writ staging
but you don't really diss-guys(disguise)well,like untrained secret agents
in the middle of the night,this cat gets caught tight,and board wide
n c'mon,look at his user title,kid can't even spell "thoughts" right*

*his user title says....detrimental to your thougts"..but he's probably gonna change it now..

Voted For: Natural killa

ok D u do not need to put numbers by ur lines tht is the worst thing to do man also u need to up ur punches quite a bit.. Natural again u come with some ill ass wordplay man, and it was making me laugh, also it was damn harsh too, good battle but V/Natural for punches and structure...please vote on the abttle in my sig..thanks

thx......but^^ya got only 2 battles and i checked polls in one and voted in one already

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This was feedback posted for Detrimental
 

man your verse could have been straight if you would just RHYME and if you did must've not picked up on it

i'm not gonna rely on a newbs opinion to elevate....how about you read over dumb ass

uppin

Voted For: Detrimental

Loved the blow line better punch lines and reala information liked the details one.........................