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Young Blaze vs. Typical
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Checkin....................
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Ight Check this murda.....
Knife Skills Percise Slitin yah Shirt Seams,Blood Scattered lookin like red Beams Cuz "Ty's" Gettin Cut Faster Than Players from New England Football Teams* *ty Law Dropped From Patriots |
check it
u cant 'shred a thread im in', like its da 'finest-a-denim' I’ll be the first to say ‘u got flow’... just ‘minus-tha-Venom' stank u smelly much... |
Blaze- You had a good wordplay and nameplay was decent in the second line.....overall...7/10
Typical- That was almost too basic...but not bad...I think your punch was a little weak thoguh...overall....5/10 v/Blaze |
v/ Young Blaze .
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v/young blaze....
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v/blaze
close tho, good drops from both |
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v=blaze |
I Liked Ty's Better...
But I Have To Vote: Blaze Although I Liked Tys Better, He Had Two Seperate Lines... They Had No Relivance To Eachother... Blaze's Bar Was More Of A One-Two Punch... So Ya, Next Time Tryn Use The First For A Settup Line... Cuz Thats The Only Reason You Being Voted Against I Think... .One. |
no doubt atticus
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yep...vote Blaze.....Typical u jsut saying he had flow without punches...or the sig he has...isnt really a punch u have to come more creative man...but pretty nice
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V/YB....................................
Harder Punch. |
v/YB......jus harder....but kinda strethced....
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