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convicted 08-08-05 12:28 PM

off an on/ not a commin bond
 
u never loved me .....an i never loved u
but id always come back 2 u
but 4 wat your just a mut
a whore, a slut........
sometimes i wondered why id hold on 4 so long
ive even cryed over u ,...........but i was wrong bout u
if somethin bad were 2 happin u be tha 1 laughtin
...............................
now ive got nothin 2 loose because of u...u talkin shit makes me confused,......so watch u gonna do
thats wat i thought,.,.....just when u think your hot your not
every line i bust,........gives me tha courage ta never stop....... just as long as your still breathin......
ima hold on stong 2 wat ive got
just 2 hear u screaming...........
i wasnt tha only 1 cheatin.......

sorry sweat tits u didnt mean shit
but dont worry baby your gonna die quick
my visions of u were always blurry
u made me sick.............
by tha time u reach thirty nothins gonna fit......ha ha ...?
u self conceded bitch

a heart can be broken even swollen ..........
it can hurt so much its like ya chokeing
every word i write is another door open
but u can never understand it
u took away a big piece of my life

success aint easy when your trapted
i give it my best...........'
call it shit but watch ya back,......
shit if i died today
would it matter.........
not enough tears 2 cry
when u feel ya life movin faster...
hight speed, no exceptions
1 eye open just 2 see watchya gettin

i dont wanna lie 2 u anymore
all this hurt an pain ive caused
is even worse than before
ive tryed 2 let it go ,........but
there's no where 4 me 2 hide anymore
some of us will never change ,.....
when love turns 2 lust u think you've got game
but u were tha only 1..... 2 blame

thanks 2 u im screwed
but wats cassy gonna do when she growe up
an she askes me wat happened 2 mommy an u
ima tell her tha truth,...........
money was an issue 2 u...
your life was so bad,.......
an i made u so mad ..........
i hated ya mother ,....
an she didnt see eye 2 eye wit your dad,...



CB83 ,.................life aint easy .......believe me
i dont care to be credited by any 1 who dont understand'

taz 08-08-05 05:01 PM

One thing you must work on.......Structure...it was hard to grasp a real flow on this when ur structure was shit...no hate though....felt the emotion good concept....but u really lacked vocab man......gutta up on that for real good rhyme scheme felt that a lot good story tellin...RTF on my open mics or possible battle....1


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