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.Kiss My Mom Goodnight.
Mystery Produced This....But, Its All Me On The Track
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=361599 linkage: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203617 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203474 |
i liked the production. i think the concept of this track was hot too. your lyrics and delivery should go hand in hand, i felt like yours didnt. delivery could be upped to be on the same level as your lyrics. good shit though.
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ur flow is aiigh...but the delivery is pointless
ugh and annoying to me some creative mixing tho not a bad track but nothing I'd bump 1 |
you MUST be from the Mid-West, you got a completely Mid-West flow, pronounciation and even beat choice, lmao...
not feelin' the 2nd verse much, 1st was better to me...your flow's on point, this just not my style of track far as the beat goes and I do't like Mid-West accents, I'd collab with you on something though cuz I know you can switch it up...just show us that you can ma ;)... |
beat is pretty coo..........quality is pretty good...
you need to work on your pronunciation more.... and lyrically....this isnt exactly great...but its not horrible... hook...is ok..kinda annoying after a while......cause your delivery on it...is not too good... overall....this was ok...nothin i would download....but...its ok....keep it up... |
thanx ya'll....i just wrote from my heart on this one....everything is the truth...and yeah im from the Mid West....NapTown.... and i'll work on my delivery....lol, which would have been better if i didnt have these sinus problems.....
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that shit is fuckin raw...it'd be even tighter if it was better quality and your vocals are alil loud but other than that.....im jockin that song..lo. fa real tho hot shit.
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