king slimm vs El Dios
 

Battle Rules:
Punchline/Persoal Battle(it can be one of them!!)
2 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-05 at 05:13 PM

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sori its meant to say Punchline/Personal Battle my bad!!!

El Dios has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 04:50 PM.

king slimm has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-05 04:52 PM.

aite here i go itz a punchline-
Talkin in bitch slapped like a macho man/
kan carry ya weight in plastic u bust lika grocery bag/

-Xplanation- in plastic is referring to text battlin cuz ya keys iz plastic ya dig

im meant to put ya kant carry ya wieght in plastic u but like grocery bags

Just post ya punch up dawg then i will............

cancel tha battle an ill do it again i fuck my line up

u aint even dropped it just do it then say about it underneath!!!!

Locked the King behind bars,with no food,just let the bitch go Slim…..
He was S.ecertly L.ivin I.n a M.etal M.anner ,left to die,so find his next of kin….

Explanation:
1ST Line: Just a bit of word play
2nd Line: Word play and if u didn’t know wot Kin meant it is when the King(in this case)has died and it is who it is pasted down to!!!

If u don’t get it PM me or don’t vote plz!!!!

rite uppin this shit plz!!!!!!!!!
Good Luck wi this dawg!!!

Voted For: El Dios

iight... both punches werent that great

el dios's punch hit harder...wordplay was AIGHT...nuttin great
slim ur punch wasnt hard at all... simple as that

vote - el dios


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Voted For: El Dios

This was pretty weak battle man....lol even for a 2 liner......el dios gets the win becuz his was more creative and used his wordplay to an advantage which gets him the win

king slim, no hate kid just dont think ur 2 liner even rhymed and it wasnt as hott of diss as el dios....RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DISQUALIFIED

Voted For: El Dios

...Wow. This like, sucked a lot.

King slimm: No. Just, no. Really. First off, first line was shit, no punch. Second line, was totally gay, no real puch, and man and bag don't rhyme.

El Dios: ...Not really that good. You had SOME wordplay, not very original. At least it rhymed, and had a weak personal, but still a personal. You get this, because the other guy sucks.

v/ El Dios

Voted For: El Dios

Heres my breakDown!

1st King Slimm:Talkin in bitch slapped like a macho man/
kan carry ya weight in plastic u bust lika grocery bag/

^^^It didnt even rhyme,An tha punch was like ah compliment..of sum sort!

I give it 1/10


Now!

El Dios:Locked the King behind bars,with no food,just let the bitch go Slim…..
He was S.ecertly L.ivin I.n a M.etal M.anner ,left to die,so find his next of kin….

^^^This was nice,good personal and punch...nice structure an using tha bold text where need'd..it flow'd together..both had no multi's...

I give it...7/10

I wish yall would've had a 6 line battle atleast...but then again..

my vote is for El Dios..he got it hands down...

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