RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Diss Tracks (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=369)
-   -   Liv-In 2 Die - Khaoz Theory Ft-Narc Uzi =Trigger Town Diss= (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203895)

MyNamesGrafhYall 08-10-05 07:58 AM

Liv-In 2 Die - Khaoz Theory Ft-Narc Uzi =Trigger Town Diss=
 
Narc-Uzi Verse 1=
NARCS bringing KHAOZ to ur wack crew and ill make sure i leave ya "Hoes Hurt"
Trigga Inc's destruction will "Cum Quick" like wathing porn clips in "Fast Foward"
With that weak Roster Tony I hope ur not Serious and if u are then ur an "Idiot"
Ill leave Tony Greens "Face bloody" like hes "Eating his Girl Out" on her "Period"
Ya is no competion cuz ya Rhyme wit no Skill while my crew be Rhyming At Will
I be the King of the Hill dont ya know that ya Livin To Die while were livin to Kill
Stanza ill Put a note saying im better than u in my bullets cause you dont Listen
So then ull "Get it thru ur Head" that im better so u can understand my Mission
Ill put this Bastard Tony in a Casket for talking about skill like he actually Has it
My Actions are drastic and Ill flip the board on his gay ass like i was Bucky Lasek
Trigga Town Inc will "Dissappear" at the exact moment that this "Diss Appears"
The doors may be open but ya'll make "No Noise" like broke down "Chandeliers"

Hook=
Da pen bleeds Inc, before u decide 2 beef...Plz re-Think
cuz narc-uzi got u woozy lyke a fifth of the hennesey drink
Use triggers on u fake niggas, then take over the town
this is a raw reality check & we gon show u how it goes down!

Khaoz Verse 2=
Every breath u take, every move we make, we expose that ur fake
for gods sake! khaoz back it again, rhymin at will wit a pen
the bullets hit ur body, an tonys lyke lapdancers cuz all he do is shake
RV's top 10 in text, I holler next, and service lyke motor mechanics
me u an yo krew r like 3+2, then u hit 4?, its not even, its bad mathmatics
u beef dont add up, mess wit raw, u got bad luck, da inc r sad fucks
BQ got no flow, dumb hoe, we jus ''luv her BODY' lyke kitted trucks
its juz a shame ur krew sucks! we culd of had a historical battle but Nope
cuz ur lyke hustlin drug dealers mixin they prdouct, ur not dope!!
aint no hope, choke choke choke when u step up on the mic
its like...Trig town is da ink, but da tip of da pen lost its point
blaze yall like joints, rite after we twist-u, I didnt mean 2 diss-u
Jus dat My aims so correct, i even hit-u when i try 2 miss-u
This diss-is-thru, if u want round 2, we rite here so holler...
Cuz i turn niggas like u into worm food & 6 feet under, jus 4 a dollar (UR CHEAP)

Hook=

Da pen bleeds Inc, before u decide 2 beef...Plz re-Think
cuz narc-uzi got u woozy lyke a fifth of the hennesey drink
Use triggers on u fake niggas, then take over the town
this is a raw reality check & we gon show u how it goes down!

MyNamesGrafhYall 08-10-05 08:35 AM

up up up up up up

NaRc-UzI 08-10-05 08:41 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2357345

heres the link uppin this

*Bad Newz* 08-10-05 06:48 PM

...we gotchu no problem this was okay sept fot tha fact// that ya structure was strecthed

noname 08-10-05 08:51 PM

I like this shit right here...beats there one.There one was too simplistic..you guys had complexity and shit...good verses by both.

~Tony Green~ 08-10-05 09:07 PM

^^^New R.A.W d/r cause The Inc. dropped him!

noname 08-10-05 09:17 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
^^^New R.A.W d/r cause The Inc. dropped him!




wtf?....I left on my own by callin out stanza to a battle....and I don't d/r...

they verses beat yours by far...your raps were pre-school..

~Tony Green~ 08-10-05 09:19 PM

LoL you left on you own right.....

but I don't even do text and I know I did good......

noname 08-10-05 09:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
LoL you left on you own right.....

but I don't even do text and I know I did good......



You don't do text...I do...so I know wat' a good rap better than you would

And wtf is that shit u put in my battle with your loverboy..stanza's basic rhyme sheme..played lines...weak wordplay(Pikachu?)...and basic personals...

beat my verse?

Please....just goes to show how clueless you are....

~Tony Green~ 08-11-05 01:25 AM

Stanza Bout To Ko You!

MyNamesGrafhYall 08-11-05 08:42 AM

yo uppin diz can anybody say owned

Rile1 08-11-05 01:25 PM

owned like lil girls owning barbie dolls....which means they were owned a lot lol

Journal!st 08-11-05 01:34 PM

owned like lil bitchez man real now they fallin apart!!!!!

Dirty Nigga 08-11-05 06:25 PM

Dissapointed, thought this was gonna be like diss of the month or somthin, wasnt that dope, You definately did own them, an some lines were RAW, But expected a better drop, Hook was nice, had a good feel to the flow, I liked the following lines......


With that weak Roster Tony I hope ur not Serious and if u are then ur an "Idiot"
Ill leave Tony Greens "Face bloody" like hes "Eating his Girl Out" on her "Period"
^^
dope

Ill put this Bastard Tony in a Casket for talking about skill like he actually Has it
My Actions are drastic and Ill flip the board on his gay ass like i was Bucky Lasek
^
made me laugh, nice punch in the second line

RV's top 10 in text, I holler next, and service lyke motor mechanics
me u an yo krew r like 3+2, then u hit 4?, its not even, its bad mathmatics
^
Nice wordplay

an the BQ Diss from Khaoz was aight, build up line was weak, but the actual punch in the second line dissin BQ was mad hot lol

Straight diss y'all......

RAW > Trigger town

NaRc-UzI 08-11-05 06:29 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Verbal Shoota
Dissapointed, thought this was gonna be like diss of the month or somthin, wasnt that dope, You definately did own them, an some lines were RAW, But expected a better drop, Hook was nice, had a good feel to the flow, I liked the following lines......


With that weak Roster Tony I hope ur not Serious and if u are then ur an "Idiot"
Ill leave Tony Greens "Face bloody" like hes "Eating his Girl Out" on her "Period"
^^
dope

Ill put this Bastard Tony in a Casket for talking about skill like he actually Has it
My Actions are drastic and Ill flip the board on his gay ass like i was Bucky Lasek
^
made me laugh, nice punch in the second line

RV's top 10 in text, I holler next, and service lyke motor mechanics
me u an yo krew r like 3+2, then u hit 4?, its not even, its bad mathmatics
^
Nice wordplay

an the BQ Diss from Khaoz was aight, build up line was weak, but the actual punch in the second line dissin BQ was mad hot lol

Straight diss y'all......

RAW > Trigger town



Both of our verse were done in less than 45 minutes so this was a keystyle collabo but we still mercked their diss


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:42 AM.