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A Quick Keystyle
...ight y'all it'z bout time i did diz here so jus peep game...
u gotta respect it...cuz my style is hard 2 grasp like a Pimp i got flowz 4 dayz like da Atlantic...& issuing Bomb Threats like Bin Laden dat keep my foes on Panic how y'all figure i can't hold my own...all u Scavendgers r like Dogs got ya Bitin on my Bone ...now it'z time 2 switch it up & get sick wit it... nobody can fuck wit me & tha rhymes wheneva i get 2 actin' a fool, it'z a Live Event jus like it'z Prime Time cuz my verses r way Colda den Bears who live up in tha Polars like pasta, my enemies get Shells dat r way bigga den Mountain Bouldaz i'm not in a gang, but if u violate...i'll bust my gat & make ya jaw dip Blood afta puttin a blu bandana on my piece, & let it start Crippin jus 4 u trippin cuz mentally breakin down dez phonies like i was playin wit Legos Blocks like i'm a Shark...& ur a Guppie who swam ova 2 tha Infested Part i'm like da Fez cuz my bars got y'all muthafuckaz believin dat ur on Lock ...yeah & it'z like dat; here's my links here Denied Truth-From Tha Heart, MaddRappa-Flaws Of Street Life, Shodown-1 Luv, Intermental-Tainted Soul & L.I.-White Flag... |
man this keystyle is hot man idk how to keystyle but this one was hot
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The Punches Were Straight...
But I Really Didnt Like The Flow And Structure... The Flow Would Often Get Lost And Then The Piece Fell Apart... Aslo That Light Blue Color Is Fucking Hard To Read... But Ya, Straight Punches, Work On Flow... Cuz If You Had The Flow Right It Woulda Been Tite... .One. |
Please Return The Favor Mayn...
Me And Vango's New Drops, "Hollow Tips Pt 2": http://community.rapverse.com/editp...tpost&p=2360110 Thanks Mayn, Stay Up... .One. |
wasnt really feelin the flow/structure....sick keystyle punches were str8.......rtf
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punches were nice but the flow sucked it was lik eyou were studering didn't know exactly how to get your point across the punches were ok check this on some real rap up in here
I’m a rambler like a gambler cast dice and blast nice Money hungry but a dummy and lonely for betting my life On numbers just to get ice and hummers much threatening strife Failure and paraphernalia taste drastic and belong in the wastebasket As trash, my graphic rent is like a traffic accident casualties fantastic Like the NBA began to see astray for new players jumping plastic Sneakers on their feet |
The structure wasnt good but the verse was nice as fuck keep doing your thang
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Drop a link or this will be closed
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i'll drop a link for him...dont close it up ah'ite...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203428 There's his link ah'ite...dont sweat it... And I'll Come Back And Edit this Billy Bob...wit some feedback Chuuch Defyned -aka- Savior's Souljah |
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