Ike - Jason's Lyric ( Topical Storytelling )
 

I replied to Tha Q's and Speats Joints.....

yea this is for a tournament im in on Hiphopemcees.com....

i won by a no show..how gay...but im in the finals now.......the topic was the movie Jasons Lyric...basically i took the plot and twisted the shit outta everything else....i think its the best ive done so far

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Jasons Lyric

damn man, very lyrical:thumbup: and yes this is one of ya best pieces. im feelin the beat, the flow is good emotion is good, just really feelin the track man the imagery in your lines is good the thing is that you wrote such a story it makes it real good man, and i know your a very good writer you should do another one of these man, i'd like to see more, good shit man keep it up.

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i dunno why but th ebegining reminds me of immortal technique, pretty dope man

Beat i heard it before...just wonderin who used it commercial beat

Intro- talkin was cool...samples i love it in the beat....

Flow- emotions are felt, "Whos this god"..wow..indepht shit ..."Skin color" line was nice...but flow was not polished as some of ya old stuff...but am feelin it nice track overall fam u did ya thang

heard this b4 as well

beat was good nice beat for real you had such a good emotion in it i really liked it good flow you kept on riding on the beat lol(take out the b and put a p ewww lol j.k) anyways overall it was good I'll give you a 8-8.5/10 for it real nice

I liked it lol everything was good nothing bad in it nice keep dropping for real.

thanks for the props....beat is Usher n Jada - Throwback

this was one of the best pieces i've heard comin out of rv....seriously..flow was on point...lots of substance..good quotables..this was dope fur sure

oh you used the same beat as my song howard and harp..


Aight listening...

holy shit your emotion is perfect. Flow was even good.

I Hate you this was great. Owned the shit out of my track.


:mad: good job fag.

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iight rtfing....

i like how it starts out... a little prescene missing in the very very beginning, but it picks up when you start spitting, I like the story telling vibe of it, emotion in the verses is really there, but the bridge again, maybe its cuz you aren't spittin but the prescence just sounds off a little, the message is dope, i likeded it- keep droppin- peesh.

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Love this...

The beat for one, always loved this one actually...and the story itself, your lyrics were at a very high level and you managed to combine it with a raw emotion. The flow was good, off here and there maybe. But overall it was pretty good. The vocab was on point, emotion in the piece was excellent. Never heard your stuff before and I must say I was pleasantly surprised, you got a nice voice as well btw!

thanks...............................

This must be on our album...Honestly, the best shit I have ever heard from you man...Emotion was strong, real deep piece...The emotion you put in your voice just made this shit so much better...Flow was near perfection...Everything was good man...BTW, get on aim :love:

word.......uppin....