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Ridicule vs Natural killa
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO 4-1 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-11-05 at 11:45 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 06:42 PM.
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suffocating as i'm braiding out ya air,ya fading outta here,as i spit my innuendo array
cuz he's about as close to a young profit(prophet) as nintendo is today** i bet a rich boy like you feels rebelious and intellectual for one liter-a-chore(literature) but after this battle,your stuck staring at the sky like TuPAc in ya signature crying for the nurse tattle,cuz it's his 1st battle,n he's gonna buffet the best born but he's a rook-key trapped,like someone locked away the chess board 10 bars off the top,'s all it took,like old books,we'll just put you on the shelf could be another Miss Cleo,cuz ya name tells us what ya verse gon do to yaself ya lost ya 1st quick like sonic,n ya now listened to the chronic,like ya shocks stay full ya dumbass is clueless,shit,ya's behind times like giving the clocks anul His user title says "Young prophet"** |
Ridicule has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 06:53 PM.
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im droppin early cant be assed hangin about here goes.....good luck homie
Dawgs been talking, that a textie be gettin whored by an audio head So I went over,took a look…….lines that resemble u,just to overfed Stopped in his tracks cuz you got chewed up and spat back down under Battles which u cud have neva won,taz has been renown for herb asunder How the fuck u here to kill us because u can’t beat us went ur knocked out Getting beat by cartoons,audio n even da blind,is nothing im shocked about This fags rhymes all recycled,so stay away, he aint safe for the envirement Cuz he's gonna be like former boxers "Trinadad" going into Retirement Been banned by Vets and beat by newbies,cuz in a few months that’s occurred And hows ya music gonna go far, when even your Ma doesnt want you to be heard Expiation: 1st Bar: He’s get beat by a audio head eg Tha Q n the rest is easy 2nd Bar: He got beat by a guy called Taz! Taz lives down under(Aussie) n asunder means torn apart 3rd bar: His title and the Taz n Tha Q bit 4th bar: He claims he’s from Trinidad n with K-Trini he got banned 5th Bar: His life story on RV n Ma=Mother n doesnt want you to be heard=Creep which makes Ma+creep=Macreep his old account |
nice drop homie..............uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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LoL...Ok...but....what's with all the K-trini refernces and when did i rep trinidad?
wtf is talking? |
uppin 4 votes.....
still can't get over it nigga....you think I'm K-trini/Macreep and comprimised a whole verse based on it... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2359087 ^^here...thassarap asked me if I was him too...check it..we got different Ip's... smh.. |
Voted For: Natural killa
Structure-Natural killa, had better flow, ridicule....flow was kinda off....didnt feel it...up on making ur liines end up near eachother.... Vocab-Natural killa, had better vocab, went nicely with his verse was feelin it...Ridicule, ur verse had plain and simple vocab wasnt feeling thta at all...up on that...try enhancing ur vocab as ur verse goes along Personals-Thought Ridicule had better personals than Natural Killa.....thats about that Punches-Natural killa had better punches.....more fresh original stuff than ridicule, ridicule didnt feel ur verse was as hard hitting has naturals Multis-Natural killa...HAd better multis but with his multis he added enhanced his vocab....very nice job killa, ridicule didnt feel ur multis was hott. Originality-Natural killa had original hott verse....which was eye appealin the whole verse....Ridicule...ur structure is eye soring try and fix that up a bit V/NATURAL KILLA PLEASE RTF SINCE I TOOK THE TIME TO VOTE ON URS |
This was feedback posted for Ridicule
No way man,
mutha fuck..............:wink: . |
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Yo dawg structure is to keep ya verse in a block shape!!!!!!! :cussing: |
:cussing: ^^mother fuvker......calllin me k-trini!!!!.................... :cussing:
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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Lmao, goddamn newbie :shoot:
hehe, jp...i know everything! |
Voted For: Ridicule
suffocating as i'm braiding out ya air,ya fading outta here,as i spit my innuendo array cuz he's about as close to a young profit(prophet) as nintendo is today** ^^^^^^^^^ Sorry man but that line sucked IMO...it was a decent attempt I saw the fact it was hard to try i bet a rich boy like you feels rebelious and intellectual for one liter-a-chore(literature) but after this battle,your stuck staring at the sky like TuPAc in ya signature ^^^^^ Ok wheres the punch...but good wordplay..that was ok crying for the nurse tattle,cuz it's his 1st battle,n he's gonna buffet the best born but he's a rook-key trapped,like someone locked away the chess board ^^^^ PLAYED....so many chess lines its crazeee but ok 10 bars off the top,'s all it took,like old books,we'll just put you on the shelf could be another Miss Cleo,cuz ya name tells us what ya verse gon do to yaself ^^ haha I liked this...nice line...1st one i rlly felt ya lost ya 1st quick like sonic,n ya now listened to the chronic,like ya shocks stay full ya dumbass is clueless,shit,ya's behind times like giving the clocks anul ^^^ GOOD...best line of ure verse...a pretty bad verse from the beggining but then the last 2 bars were hot ill give you that Overall 5/10 work on ure punches Dawgs been talking, that a textie be gettin whored by an audio head So I went over,took a look…….lines that resemble u,just to overfed ^^^ sorry dude didnt like the line Stopped in his tracks cuz you got chewed up and spat back down under Battles which u cud have neva won,taz has been renown for herb asunder ^^ liked the wordplay...good diss...good punch How the fuck u here to kill us because u can’t beat us went ur knocked out Getting beat by cartoons,audio n even da blind,is nothing im shocked about ^^^ Yo ure new good try but this didnt work This fags rhymes all recycled,so stay away, he aint safe for the envirement Cuz he's gonna be like former boxers "Trinadad" going into Retirement ^^^ Good shit there...see the punch Been banned by Vets and beat by newbies,cuz in a few months that’s occurred And hows ya music gonna go far, when even your Ma doesnt want you to be heard ^^^^ decent punch...complex but decnet 6/10.... Decent shit...you get this IMO...you had the punches...you had sum good lines but still elevation is needed |
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