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Dervla 08-11-05 05:55 PM

Thinking about writing a Book. (Short-Story)
 
Word. I'm Thinking Writing A Book..Like 8 Pages Till the next chapter and such. I need A title and some Tips...Like what to do on the first Chapter? Grasp their Attention by..............? Word something Like that.


Drop Opinions... :thumbup:

Dervla 08-11-05 05:58 PM

I said Drop them!....

Indeph 08-11-05 06:16 PM

You didn't tell us the topic.

How about fluffy bunny sex?


Or If I know your personality. Its scary and disturbing.
So maybe do a phycological thing. Use your demonic ways. :thumbup:

Dervla 08-11-05 06:26 PM

Yeah that's my personality...KILL DIE MU FUCKAH!......Lol...But still Sweet & Depressing and Very Much Grasp...So I need A title...:love:

Daubs 08-11-05 06:28 PM

Just make it have a lotta twists and it will be a good read.

Dervla 08-11-05 06:31 PM

^^ Yeah I'm not that good at "Twist" anyone good at that?.......And Plus I need Tips of how to REALLY grasp the audience (Readers) Attention on the First Chapter, cause if it isn't...Blah FUck your book! Ya know?

I'm going to make a Diary (Short-Stories Tweety)...If that's ok with Indeph (Mod)

Indeph 08-11-05 06:32 PM

Aight it depends. You can take an everyday situation and make it big or you can take a more extreme topic like demons or whatever and talk about it. If you're going for depressed do something with suicide. Its real common. Describe every feeling, but do it in a poetic way that makes the reader feel uneasy. Like If I wanna say "I wanna kill myself". I can say "life's worth decreased, I question the need to breath" or yadayada with yo crazzzeh ass. :)

Daubs 08-11-05 06:33 PM

Pull them in by making it full of tension so they wanna find out what hapens next.

Yes I got an "A" in my mocks.

Indeph 08-11-05 06:33 PM

Sure thats ok its your diary. :love:

Dervla 08-11-05 06:35 PM

Thank you to both of you INdeph and Daubs.
I got a 5.5 on my Writing Fcat in 7 & 8 th Grade (The max=6.0)

WHO'S DOPE NOW! HUH!? LOL J/P :love:

Daubs 08-11-05 06:38 PM

I got an A in year 10 mocks, and i got another year of studying, highest is A*.

:cool:

Dervla 08-11-05 06:46 PM

BLAH I HATE YOU...........*walks away*

Daubs 08-11-05 06:51 PM

lol, you love me rly :love:

Dervla 08-11-05 06:54 PM

I dont Like anyone that who works or Live at Walt Disney :love:

poisenous_tongue 08-23-05 04:50 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Lola Cruez. II
^^ Yeah I'm not that good at "Twist" anyone good at that?.......And Plus I need Tips of how to REALLY grasp the audience (Readers) Attention on the First Chapter, cause if it isn't...Blah FUck your book! Ya know?

I'm going to make a Diary (Short-Stories Tweety)...If that's ok with Indeph (Mod)



when writing, always keep in mind the audience you intend on writing for. Try to reflect on what their likes and dislikes are. Paint them a vivid picture that can only make them want more from the story. It has worked wonders for me.

Another tip is to organise your material, decide on the location of the story, do a profile of the main characters and what they like dislike and also what they look like. This way your story will be consistant. If twists do occur they will be evident because it will go up against the consistancy of the plot.

I hope that helps.

I enjoy writing short stories - good luck with yours.

Lola good luck with your unquoted silence battle with my bro criTic

Poisenous_tongue


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