Another battle of mine
 

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ok.....definitely better than your 1st drop....you gotta work on your flow though...and your delivery...try puttin emphasis on your lines....get into your words....the lyrics were pretty decent...quality is better than the 1st drop too......

so things you need to work on...mos def your flow...its not bad to start out with....

Delivery....get into your shit man....

lyrically its pretty good...but theres always elevation room there for everyone...

but...keep it up....and youll be doin good in not too long...just keep workin at it

Thnx for the feed uppin,

Turn that UPPP, damn, I can't hear shiiiit, raggin on fat people is getting reallllly old, your voice sounds so little lol that's hularious, it's just a bunch of shit mumbled together, I'd rewrite that shit homie serious. TURN IT UP!!

how about you turn ya shit up and a battle is a battle so you have to diss yo opponent i found his pic so i dissed him upon that and why dont you just put the volume high on yo computer cuz it aint low.